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Unread post by ticohans » Fri Jan 17, 2003 1:28 am

No feedback?... :(

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Unread post by gravedigger » Fri Jan 17, 2003 2:05 am

I just listened to your 3 newones.

man, you're better than Dave Matthews.

do you play many gigs around your area? there are some very cool guitar licks on there. you are truly very good, and you make me not want to play my guitar anymore :wink: Although I gotta say, as good as your voice is, I find it lacks texture, or flavor, I don't know of the right word. It just seems the same everywhere in the song and in every song. Don't take this the wrong way, you're a better singer than I'll ever be.

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Unread post by ticohans » Fri Jan 17, 2003 9:02 am

"man, you're better than Dave Matthews."

BLASPHEMY!! :)

Interesting comment on the voice. So you'd like a few different sounds? Or is the texture of my voice not all that agreeable to you? Is it that you don't like the way it always sounds, or that after a while you just get tired of it?

Thanks for the constructive criticism. I need it.
And your praise, while I assume was a little tounge-in-cheek, is appreciated.

Oh, and to answer your question, no I don't play many gigs in my area. A few school things, but rarely anything off campus. I really need to get out and play a little more.

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Unread post by gravedigger » Fri Jan 17, 2003 11:31 am

ticohans wrote:"man, you're better than Dave Matthews."

BLASPHEMY!! :)

Interesting comment on the voice. So you'd like a few different sounds? Or is the texture of my voice not all that agreeable to you? Is it that you don't like the way it always sounds, or that after a while you just get tired of it?

Thanks for the constructive criticism. I need it.
And your praise, while I assume was a little tounge-in-cheek, is appreciated.

Oh, and to answer your question, no I don't play many gigs in my area. A few school things, but rarely anything off campus. I really need to get out and play a little more.
it was funny, I started playing your Dumpty song, than half way through I figured I'd start downloading the next one, but it came on right away but I didn't realize so both songs were playing at the same time and at first I thought it was the same song :? :? :? I was like what the hell?! but then I realized it :) I'm serious about the guitar playing actually, its fast and smooth and the riffs are very creative and flow like beer (I don't like wine) but yeah the voice reminds me of Bruce Guthro, who is a great songwriter and singer but its a pure voice and gets, hate to say it boring, after awhile. but hey, that's being over critical, man you HAVE to get out and play a little more, at open mics or things. when they hear you, they'll book you.
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Unread post by ticohans » Fri Jan 17, 2003 11:43 am

I've got no problems with anyone being over critical. I appreciate it. A lot.

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Unread post by gravedigger » Fri Jan 17, 2003 11:46 am

ticohans wrote:I've got no problems with anyone being over critical. I appreciate it. A lot.
by the way, I like those 3 new ones a lot more than the others. They're more creative and seem to have more life to them, I didn't "listen" to the lyrics yet but I'm gonna listen to them now, and give you some feedback on them.
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Unread post by firedancer86 » Fri Jan 17, 2003 12:51 pm

Returning to Dust is an awsome original sounding tune with highlights on the vocal melody, I especially like the ruturning theme (the proposition of, "what can I..."?), then the solution ("i know your you...").

I like the quick assention of "the stories returning..."is a nice way to end it.

Are you talking about a "girl"?

I like your voice more than John Mayer's, because you aren't as annoying.

Nice harmonies...the vocals make the song obviously...

A positive message which is much different than most music today...

I really enjoy the whole thing...I like they way that you don't follow the norm and only use a strange progression...not your average songs like now-adays...

You should persue a career in the studio or at least become poular in your area man...you deserve these props amongst most of the crap that they play on the radio...(sorry, I am just throwing thoughts together right now)...

Well, good show, keep these kind of tunes up and I will always DL them :wink:
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Unread post by ticohans » Fri Jan 17, 2003 3:01 pm

fire, returning to dust is about a girl and a little more than that. i was in a very very very serious relationship for two years. she was my first and up to now only girlfriend. i thought that we were going to end up spending the rest of our lives together. i am a christian and have a very vibrant relationship with god, and i really felt that it was something that he was blessing. to make a long story short, in a period of two weeks, that relationship fell apart in very dramatic fashion, and i was cut to the bone. so that song is birthed out of that situation, but it's addressed to god. hope that sheds a little light on the song.

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Unread post by DmbFanJason » Fri Jan 17, 2003 8:50 pm

way to go tico...sounded like it had a little Latino de musica el fiesto de la influenciatio cha cha el culturala....juuuuuuuuuuust kidding, seriously you sound like john mayer to me, what more do you want?

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Unread post by johntherevelator » Mon Jan 20, 2003 1:42 pm

HOLY SHIT TICO!!!!
returning to dust is an AMAZING song. AMAZING.
im serious man, that song is really good. your vocal work gets an A+.
is there any way i can dL that song onto my computer from that site, that is, as long as you don't mind. :D :D :D
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Unread post by Lilsters » Mon Jan 20, 2003 2:39 pm

dude. i resgistered just to tell you that that is amazing. your voice is beautiful, your lyrics are great and your guitar work is phenominal. i was wondering if there's any way i can get the lyrics?
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Unread post by cave_cricket » Mon Jan 20, 2003 2:41 pm

johntherevelator wrote:HOLY SHIT TICO!!!!
returning to dust is an AMAZING song. AMAZING.
im serious man, that song is really good. your vocal work gets an A+.
is there any way i can dL that song onto my computer from that site, that is, as long as you don't mind. :D :D :D
I don't want to assume anything...but he said I could burn them to a CD so I'm sure you can dowload them!
Peace,

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Unread post by ticohans » Mon Jan 20, 2003 3:56 pm

Yeah, you guys are free to download the stuff. If you are having problems downloading stuff, right click on the link, and select "save target as," then put it wherever you want.

Just in case you missed it before, there is another site with a little more of my music, http://www.davidson.edu/personal/chwood/home.htm

The first part is actually a tab of Returning to Dust as requested by a few posters, including guitar clips to help along. The second part has some of my newer stuff, but it's a rough recording as I just used my computer mic and windows sound recorder.

Lyrics for Returning to Dust:

You pursue me
With a ruthless love
And in your hands you've shattered
All of my dreams

And with your plow you've cut through the dry
Surrounding my heart
And with your gentlest of words
I am slain

But when I count the cost
Take in my hands the dreams you've broken
Though you have shattered in your strong hands
My greatest loves
And I feel so lost

Still I will run for you...

And what is all this
All of these lies I need so much
All these vanities
All of these broken, fading lusts
When this life I'm losing
These stories returning to dust

What can I hold that will not break
And where is the good that I can make
And if this short road it leads to death
Why am I so hell bent on this life

But I know your love will never break
And you are the good I cannot make
So as I die into your life
Won't you take my hand, take my hand

Cause this life I'm losing
These stories retuning to dust



Just want to thank everyone again for the kind words. The encouragement really does mean a lot to me. More and more I'm thinking about trying to make it in the music industry, so we'll see where all of this leads...

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Unread post by johntherevelator » Mon Jan 20, 2003 3:56 pm

cave_cricket wrote:
johntherevelator wrote:HOLY SHIT TICO!!!!
returning to dust is an AMAZING song. AMAZING.
im serious man, that song is really good. your vocal work gets an A+.
is there any way i can dL that song onto my computer from that site, that is, as long as you don't mind. :D :D :D
I don't want to assume anything...but he said I could burn them to a CD so I'm sure you can dowload them!
Peace,
how?
well, the only way i can listen to those songs is on that site, how do i get them from the site to my hard drive (sorry, im not the most computer-smart guy in the world)
Everybody always asks me how she's doing. Has she really lost her mind? I said "I couldn't tell you, I've lost mine."
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Unread post by ticohans » Mon Jan 20, 2003 4:01 pm

Go to the site, and then right click on the link for the song you want to download. When you do this, a little pop-up window will appear. From this window, select the heading that says "save target as" or "save as." This will bring up another window of your computer's hard drive. Select where you want to save it (and make sure you remember where you save it) and click "OK" or "Save" or whatever the affirmitive button is. That should do the trick...

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