Original Song "Paper Idols"

deceptivehero · Unread post by **deceptivehero** » Mon Dec 27, 2004 2:42 pm

I thought you did a great job on this but not to beat a dead horse here mix those vocals a bit louder. In any case, nicely done.

hofdaddy · Unread post by **hofdaddy** » Mon Dec 27, 2004 4:12 pm

Dude! That was AWESOME! The lyrics actually struck a chord with me cause I am thinking that you are actually very far away from everything. Damn! Good stuff!

jaroben · Unread post by **jaroben** » Mon Dec 27, 2004 4:52 pm

nice job man

gumbomadness · Unread post by **gumbomadness** » Mon Dec 27, 2004 5:02 pm

i like it

Appfro · Unread post by **Appfro** » Tue Dec 28, 2004 2:30 pm

gumbomadness wrote:i like it

thanks, i'm listening to yours right now. i'll get back to ya

Trippin Hillbilly · Unread post by **Trippin Hillbilly** » Wed Dec 29, 2004 2:20 pm

Alrighty Mitch.

Boatloads of passion. That's how i'd sum this up.

I've always said that you have a kickass voice but seem to lack a bit of confidence with it. Let it rip man and turn up those damn vocals.

People around here have the tendency of saying the same thing over and over like: "it was too repetitive and the progression was nothing new"... don't listen to that shit.
When you're writing a song in this kinda genre, the main focus is usually on the lyrics and vocal performance.

That's just my opinion, simplicity can be a very good thing and I really like the progression.

As for the lead bits, those harmonics in the beginning were badass and the picking at around the 1:25 sounds perfect. The solos were cool too but needed to be turned up a couple of notches.

It's way too long though.
I really like the way it builds up to the end, it just that it takes too long to get there. I'd aim for around the 4 minute mark if I were you. You could make this song feel like a giant orgasm if you keep that consistent build up. :lol:

I don't know if that helps :roll:

I'd like to hear the others if you have any. AIM me or something.

later bud
miguel

You_Enjoy_Myself · Unread post by **You_Enjoy_Myself** » Wed Dec 29, 2004 2:49 pm

Paper Idols is an anagram for Appsoldier.

Don't think I wouldn't notice.

Appfro · Unread post by **Appfro** » Wed Dec 29, 2004 3:19 pm

You_Enjoy_Myself wrote:Paper Idols is an anagram for Appsoldier.

Don't think I wouldn't notice.

HOLY CRAP!!!! I DIDN'T NOTICE THAT!!!! THAT'S SO FREAKING CRAZY!!!!!! I seriously had no idea. I hope you believe me and don't think i'm being a smart ass...i even had to look up anagram. that's so insane. i'm laughing pretty hard right now, a little out of shock.

Trippin Hillbilly wrote:Alrighty Mitch.

Boatloads of passion. That's how i'd sum this up.

I've always said that you have a kickass voice but seem to lack a bit of confidence with it. Let it rip man and turn up those damn vocals.

People around here have the tendency of saying the same thing over and over like: "it was too repetitive and the progression was nothing new"... don't listen to that shit.
When you're writing a song in this kinda genre, the main focus is usually on the lyrics and vocal performance.

That's just my opinion, simplicity can be a very good thing and I really like the progression.

As for the lead bits, those harmonics in the beginning were badass and the picking at around the 1:25 sounds perfect. The solos were cool too but needed to be turned up a couple of notches.

It's way too long though.
I really like the way it builds up to the end, it just that it takes too long to get there. I'd aim for around the 4 minute mark if I were you. You could make this song feel like a giant orgasm if you keep that consistent build up.

I don't know if that helps
I'd like to hear the others if you have any. AIM me or something.

later bud
miguel

thanks a million man. i'll shoot for that 4 min mark, i don't know how i'll do it but i'll try. it's like i told someone else, i have a problem, i hate to end songs. as i get more up, i'll let you know, but most of them won't go up until after i get home. you know, before i left you said something to the nature of how it sucked i had to leave but it would make for some good songwriting oppertunities...you were so right. thanks a million again miguel. you're awesome.

You_Enjoy_Myself · Unread post by **You_Enjoy_Myself** » Wed Dec 29, 2004 3:28 pm

Appsoldier wrote:
You_Enjoy_Myself wrote:Paper Idols is an anagram for Appsoldier.

Don't think I wouldn't notice.
HOLY CRAP!!!! I DIDN'T NOTICE THAT!!!! THAT'S SO FREAKING CRAZY!!!!!! I seriously had no idea. I hope you believe me and don't think i'm being a smart ass...i even had to look up anagram. that's so insane. i'm laughing pretty hard right now, a little out of shock.

Haha, I thought that you did it on purpose, but if you didn't....

well that's pretty fucked up.

HCHaikuWarrior · Unread post by **HCHaikuWarrior** » Wed Dec 29, 2004 4:18 pm

i really liked this man.
i smelt a little so damn lucky inspiration with one of the chords. but there is nothing wrong with inspiration and using chords. awesome job keep up the work. and i liked the harmonic intro it was nice.

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