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Unread post by davewmartin » Sat Apr 07, 2007 11:35 pm

thanks agian,...............









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Unread post by Alazais » Sun Apr 08, 2007 6:03 pm

I listened to all 3 songs, I really like Your moon. Your voice has a distinct quality in that one over the others that draws me to it. The Verse riff sticks to me.

The only real critique I have is to work on your Lyrics a bit more. Sometimes they come off as cheesy. However I like "Your stomach plays home to these butterflies" before the bridge. It makes the song for me.


Overall, good job.
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Unread post by davewmartin » Sun Apr 08, 2007 6:48 pm

thank kind sir,.......
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Unread post by davewmartin » Tue Apr 10, 2007 2:42 pm

so dana? is that what you think of my songs??
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