another song, please listen!

[ksutterley]

hey guys. here is another song to critique. Thanks for all your help on the last one!

http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?a ... AB78D58E48

[ksutterley]

oh and here and the lyrics:

today i watched leaves fall slower than they ever have before
I let the buzz dull to silence of evermore
borrowed a minute and watched it slip away
i thought about tomorrow and i thought of yesterday

i see the shadows of the past and the hope of the future here
i see shadows of the past
where the windows close and doors open i know
wherever we are that's where' i'm going to go

back to the ground i see a billion stars in the sky
watching their own candles burn in the night
one by one we're all alone but together
scatter the heavens in constellations

i see the shadows of the past and the hope of the future here
yeah,
where the windows close and doors open i know
where we're going's where' i'm going to go

[davewmartin]

i liked it,.great voice,..if i had to find anything ti fix,.maybee hitin a few notes better with your voice is all,...great job bro!!!!!!!!!!

[markTR]

Hey man, very very solid. I like the chord progressions that you've got going on, really clean sounding.

I'd say as far as critique goes, it was a little pitchy at times, just watch when you draw out some of those long notes not to fall flat.

Otherwise, really nice. Good work