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by songofish » Wed Feb 14, 2007 3:42 pm
I have to apologize for the quality of some parts - the mix sounds much better if you use headphones. I decided to sit down with my roomates Mac and try out Garage Band...put this together:
http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?a ... 1C7382F7D0
Let me know what you think

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by Speenis » Wed Feb 14, 2007 4:38 pm
This is my favorite Zeppelin song so forgive me if I come off a little harsh. The mix, like you said, sounds like shit. What instruments are you playing? Its a cool take on the song, but I think it would be much easier to record if it was all acoustic. I was also looking forward to hearing vocals (which really make the song).
Overall, it sounds like your playing was pretty good, but the recording/mixing sounds horrible, like its underwater. I don't think your recording technique allow your style of this song to shine. It would sound much better if it was all just acoustic, or if you had much better recording equipment.
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by songofish » Wed Feb 14, 2007 4:50 pm
Speenis wrote:This is my favorite Zeppelin song so forgive me if I come off a little harsh. The mix, like you said, sounds like shit. What instruments are you playing? Its a cool take on the song, but I think it would be much easier to record if it was all acoustic. I was also looking forward to hearing vocals (which really make the song).
Overall, it sounds like your playing was pretty good, but the recording/mixing sounds horrible, like its underwater. I don't think your recording technique allow your style of this song to shine. It would sound much better if it was all just acoustic, or if you had much better recording equipment.
I'm just trying to emulate the sound most Zeppelin bootlegs have
Just kidding. I would've loved to have an acoustic or a mandolin...but all I have here is my electric, so its all done on that. I'm not so sure it would be easier to record with acoustic instruments though, because the software I'm using is garbage. It's the best I have available though
Thanks for the feedback.

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by Ryeguy » Wed Feb 14, 2007 9:58 pm
hey man thats cool.. About time someone covered a Zeppelin song on these boards.. hahaha.. You've inspired me to learn this song now.. good job man.
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by myxomatosis » Wed Feb 14, 2007 10:31 pm
think it'd sound much better acoustic... not bad though. I was excited with the title, but my expectations were lowered after reading speen's post

. I'd like to hear someone do the vocals.

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by iha » Wed Feb 14, 2007 10:31 pm
I too love this song. This isn't bad imo. However, the electric guitar and mixing make it sound almost like a midi.

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by RunsWithBuffalo » Wed Feb 14, 2007 11:16 pm
The playing is actually really good.
Tell us about your recording setup, there may be ways to get this to sound better.
The main problem is you only have one instrument and you are trying to make a very deep layered sound. Its possible but very hard.
Again, your guitar playing is very good, i enjoyed it!
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by songofish » Thu Feb 15, 2007 1:32 am
RunsWithBuffalo wrote:The playing is actually really good.
Tell us about your recording setup, there may be ways to get this to sound better.
The main problem is you only have one instrument and you are trying to make a very deep layered sound. Its possible but very hard.
Again, your guitar playing is very good, i enjoyed it!
thanks, I appreciate it
My setup was basically my electric plugged directly into the line-in of an Apple laptop (not sure about the model of the laptop as its not mine but its brand new.) I used Garage Band (
http://www.apple.com/ilife/garageband/) which came with the computer to record 4 layers. There's not really much else I can say. But the hissing and murkiness seem to be there no matter how much I toy with the settings, sounds, pan tracks, etc. Its a decent program in terms of playing with sounds and editing, but not so good in terms of clarity and quality.
What do most people that don't have hundreds to spend on equipment use? I'm really not too savvy on this subject as you can tell.
I've been told that Cool Edit is a better program for simple multi track purposes....either that or a 4 track recorder

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by RunsWithBuffalo » Thu Feb 15, 2007 10:06 am
Yeah, cool edit is great, thats what i use, lots of decent effects, a powerful equalizer and lots and lots of tracks. If you are just going to record guitar, i would suggest looking into the line 6 guitar tone port. It comes with all sorts of virtual effects pedals that sound pretty good. With something like that you could put different effects on each track thus separating them out a little. the ohter way to make this sound better is through arrangement and EQ. You want to give each track its own "sonic space." in other words, if the tracks have a lot of overlap in frequency i.e. in the 300hz range, its going to sound muddy.
Check out these great websites for detailed info
http://www.tweakheadz.com
or
http://www.recording.org
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by songofish » Thu Feb 15, 2007 12:26 pm
RunsWithBuffalo wrote:Yeah, cool edit is great, thats what i use, lots of decent effects, a powerful equalizer and lots and lots of tracks. If you are just going to record guitar, i would suggest looking into the line 6 guitar tone port. It comes with all sorts of virtual effects pedals that sound pretty good. With something like that you could put different effects on each track thus separating them out a little. the ohter way to make this sound better is through arrangement and EQ. You want to give each track its own "sonic space." in other words, if the tracks have a lot of overlap in frequency i.e. in the 300hz range, its going to sound muddy.
Check out these great websites for detailed info
http://www.tweakheadz.com
or
http://www.recording.org
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I'll look into it!
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