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Unread post by daylight_2004 » Tue Jan 16, 2007 11:01 am

Pretty good...my suggestion would be to be more dynamic in your playing and change up the rythm to seperate the parts; fingerpick the verse and then break into a strum for the prechorus. You definitely keep a good rythm but the strumming pattern gets old. What happened to the french part at the end, that's my fav....la la da da, da da de da...La fille danse, quand elle joue avec moi ;)

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Unread post by eliot1171 » Tue Jan 16, 2007 2:03 pm

Your voice has a great sense of confidence which is a very hard thing to learn or teach. Great dynamics as well.
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Unread post by Appfro » Sun Jan 21, 2007 1:02 pm

i think you're using the wrong rhythm and strumming pattern in the verses. and that's why you're having to stop between pieces. your voice is fine, a bit young, but you'll get more strength as you practice. but you really need to work on pushing that voice out w/ strength and confidence.

not bad, a bit of practicing w/ the song will help this song out, but you did fine w/ it.

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Unread post by RunsWithBuffalo » Sun Jan 21, 2007 10:43 pm

Good timbre to the voice, really like it. It sounds like you need to just practice singing and playing at the same time and then the words will begin to fall into place. Try practicing with a metronome too!

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