Song I wrote

[tbillies86]

Hey guys, i wrote this song over the summer and recorded it with cool edit pro...i recorded the guitar, bass and vocals, and my brother did the solo...lemme kno what u guys think.... thanks

http://download.yousendit.com/312C77324362B6FD

[Banjobach]

The guitar sounds eerily close to She Says by Howie Day. The vocals are a little off in a few places. In the parts were you go lower and say "i have you" seem a little off. I liked the other notes that you held. The chord progression got a little dull. Maybe if you put a barre section in it, it would break the song up a little bit.