Song My brother did

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dmb_rulz
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Song My brother did

Unread post by dmb_rulz » Sat Oct 28, 2006 2:29 pm

This is a song my brother did. Sorry about the recording it came off a cassette tape. Let me know what you think he would love to know :D


http://download.yousendit.com/923A03B36AC93A85
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muzak
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Unread post by muzak » Sat Oct 28, 2006 3:33 pm

Good vocal;

)To me( the song needs a chorus and bridge, or at least a bridge.

Something to break up the repetition...

:)
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AustinG
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nice

Unread post by AustinG » Wed Nov 01, 2006 5:44 pm

good vocals and nice idea. Recording is less than great and the guitar sounds a little shaky.

I agree with the previous poster, I'd like to hear something to break it up.. but good idea and I like the tone of the vocals.
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