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ksutterley
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please critique my song

Unread post by ksutterley » Sun Oct 22, 2006 2:06 pm

here is a new recording, I have been trying to work on my singing. Let me know what you think, and what I can do to improve it. Thanks!


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Unread post by JonTheSpaceMan » Sun Oct 22, 2006 8:54 pm

solid but you need to break out of the monotone get more confidence in your voice. if your not going to sing dont sing but if you are going to sing then fuckin sing. good song though. caught my head bobin a little.
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Unread post by Appfro » Sun Oct 22, 2006 9:05 pm

your voice sounds like anthony kiedis a bit...when you open up. your voice sounds great when you let it be. but for most of it you're holding back. but w/ a bit of practice, you'll have a very cool voice.

not much to say about the song. didn't hate it, didn't love it. pretty good. no real critiques, it is what it is and you played it well.
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Unread post by vinestreet98 » Mon Oct 23, 2006 2:17 pm

i like it a lot... i think your voice is spot on but try putting your diaphram behind your voice more... it'll add a little more natural vibrato which i think you're almost at but you hold it back it seems... i do like the song... you have a nice quality to your voice.
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Unread post by ksutterley » Mon Oct 23, 2006 5:34 pm

i have had a couple people tell me to sing using my diaphragm more...but how exactly do you do that? are there any specific things I can do to work on it?
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Unread post by Appfro » Mon Oct 23, 2006 5:47 pm

ksutterley wrote:i have had a couple people tell me to sing using my diaphragm more...but how exactly do you do that? are there any specific things I can do to work on it?
the air that you breathe when you sing should come from your stomach. if you were taking in a big breath to sing, your stomach would swell up more than your chest would. also contract your stomach muscles when you sing. stay relaxed, but the air is being pushed from you belly. that adds strength, volume, and allows you to really belt it out adding confidence to it. wake up your neighbors kind of thing.
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Unread post by lyrics101 » Wed Oct 25, 2006 3:33 am

Appfro wrote:
ksutterley wrote:i have had a couple people tell me to sing using my diaphragm more...but how exactly do you do that? are there any specific things I can do to work on it?
the air that you breathe when you sing should come from your stomach. if you were taking in a big breath to sing, your stomach would swell up more than your chest would. also contract your stomach muscles when you sing. stay relaxed, but the air is being pushed from you belly. that adds strength, volume, and allows you to really belt it out adding confidence to it. wake up your neighbors kind of thing.
I had a whole paragraph on how it works, I'll try to find it.
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