Check my tune out and tell me the crack!

[whirl_it_up]

I've wanted to complete a full song with lyrics and record it with a good mic for some time now and I like this tune I've been playing recently so I recorded the basis of it..sounds bad as of the mic I used (or thats my excuse harhar) ..and well as a muck up a canny bit.

Anyways, can anyone tell me if its any good or not to work on it and turn into a song? I've never did a full song with lyrics before before and really want to but don't know, like seriously haven't got a clue, (I'm not musically inclined at all) so I just wanna know if its worth it adding lyrics to it and doing it proper...or if its a big waste of time 'cause its shit?

It's only a couple of minutes long so (well less than if you miss out me messing at the end) so if you've got time please check it out

http://www.sendspace.com/file/pxahlt

Thanks
Clare~

[6_strings_for_life]

yea its got potential, sweet little chord progression. Go with it.

[jsgksu]

tell you the crack?

[whirl_it_up]

ummm 'crack'where i come from means tell me the deal, tell me whats with...that sort of thing

[Blake]

you crazy brits

[whirl_it_up]

aye we are! but it's good that way i think

(i'm more crazy than a normal brit though as i come from a region that speaks a different dilect so we use odd words)

[lyrics101]

It's got potential. The intro to it (that repeats toward the end) could use some creative work -- right now it's a standard chord progression, and there's nothing really interesting to it that grabs me. I feel like it needs a Major 7th somewhere in there.

Keep working with it, though. I like the half-note riff in the middle.