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Unread post by Trippin Hillbilly » Fri Nov 21, 2003 1:51 pm

wow............. that was actually pretty damn impressive!
You've got an amazing voice. 02:17.........THAT WAS NICE!

wow..... :shock:

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Unread post by SomeDevil0879 » Fri Nov 21, 2003 2:13 pm

You are unbelievable. Will you marry me? :wink:

In all seriousness, I have to agree with some of the other posts....I really think you have what it takes to make it. Good luck.

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Unread post by fatjack » Fri Nov 21, 2003 4:29 pm

how does it feel to have all those lips on your ass sarah?
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Unread post by borocks » Fri Nov 21, 2003 4:32 pm

pretty wet I suppose...
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Unread post by Speenis » Fri Nov 21, 2003 5:43 pm

whoa bo, u switched up your avatar again!?!?!?! you r one sneaky guy
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Unread post by NoNotThat » Fri Nov 21, 2003 8:16 pm

Appsoldier wrote:im truely jealous of your talent. i have no suggestions on how you could improve.
do you write? if not, find a writer, cause you need to make a demo.
they "hey hey" part gave me chill bumps...seriously.
when you make it, will you not forget your friends :D
i think i heard some rhythm slips (but it was during quiet parts, im pretty sure it was just the recording skipping)

wow sarah. i wish i knew you cause id make you play for me all the time. hell, id make you give me lessons :D this was another superb cover.
thanks appsy :) I can't write, though :(
SomeDevil0879 wrote:You are unbelievable. Will you marry me? :wink:
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DustyDave wrote:That was very beautiful :cry: .... What tab did you use for that one ?
i didn't use a tab...i hardly ever do

fatjack wrote:how does it feel to have all those lips on your ass sarah?
shut up? :?



thanks guys :)
but just wait til I post an original...you will take everything back :lol:

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Unread post by geekmug » Sat Nov 22, 2003 6:19 am

I'll criticize.. 'cause people are way too nice :-p

I think you are laying into the bass notes during the verses a little too heavily.. um.. I think you are slightly too dramatic with the dynamics in your voice, you emphasize a little hard in the first verse.. you cheat some beats of their full lengths every once and a while..

ok, well, I could maybe find more things to be critical about, but now we are justing working towards perfecting it and not just making it good

good stuff

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Unread post by borocks » Sat Nov 22, 2003 7:46 am

BigSpeen3436 wrote:whoa bo, u switched up your avatar again!?!?!?! you r one sneaky guy
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Unread post by Trippin Hillbilly » Sat Nov 22, 2003 8:31 am

geekmug wrote:I'll criticize.. 'cause people are way too nice :-p

I think you are laying into the bass notes during the verses a little too heavily.. um.. I think you are slightly too dramatic with the dynamics in your voice, you emphasize a little hard in the first verse.. you cheat some beats of their full lengths every once and a while..

ok, well, I could maybe find more things to be critical about, but now we are justing working towards perfecting it and not just making it good

good stuff
no offense and all but you shouldn't be the one giving out vocal advice. :roll:

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Unread post by borocks » Sat Nov 22, 2003 8:39 am

Trippin Hillbilly wrote:
geekmug wrote:I'll criticize.. 'cause people are way too nice :-p

I think you are laying into the bass notes during the verses a little too heavily.. um.. I think you are slightly too dramatic with the dynamics in your voice, you emphasize a little hard in the first verse.. you cheat some beats of their full lengths every once and a while..

ok, well, I could maybe find more things to be critical about, but now we are justing working towards perfecting it and not just making it good

good stuff
no offense and all but you shouldn't be the one giving out vocal advice. :roll:
:)
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Unread post by DustyDave » Sat Nov 22, 2003 8:45 am

Trippin Hillbilly wrote:
geekmug wrote:I'll criticize.. 'cause people are way too nice :-p

I think you are laying into the bass notes during the verses a little too heavily.. um.. I think you are slightly too dramatic with the dynamics in your voice, you emphasize a little hard in the first verse.. you cheat some beats of their full lengths every once and a while..

ok, well, I could maybe find more things to be critical about, but now we are justing working towards perfecting it and not just making it good

good stuff
no offense and all but you shouldn't be the one giving out vocal advice. :roll:
lol hey Trippin , long time no see eh

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Unread post by Trippin Hillbilly » Sat Nov 22, 2003 9:01 am

DustyDave wrote:
Trippin Hillbilly wrote:
geekmug wrote:I'll criticize.. 'cause people are way too nice :-p

I think you are laying into the bass notes during the verses a little too heavily.. um.. I think you are slightly too dramatic with the dynamics in your voice, you emphasize a little hard in the first verse.. you cheat some beats of their full lengths every once and a while..

ok, well, I could maybe find more things to be critical about, but now we are justing working towards perfecting it and not just making it good

good stuff
no offense and all but you shouldn't be the one giving out vocal advice. :roll:
lol hey Trippin , long time no see eh
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Unread post by DustyDave » Sat Nov 22, 2003 9:03 am

Damn right im back , i've been away from here for a few months i know :cry: i missed everyone of you though lol , i've been busy getting my life ruined ....

How is everyone doing ? How are your Martin doing ;) ?

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Unread post by NoNotThat » Sat Nov 22, 2003 9:12 am

geekmug wrote:I'll criticize.. 'cause people are way too nice :-p

I think you are laying into the bass notes during the verses a little too heavily.. um.. I think you are slightly too dramatic with the dynamics in your voice, you emphasize a little hard in the first verse.. you cheat some beats of their full lengths every once and a while..

ok, well, I could maybe find more things to be critical about, but now we are justing working towards perfecting it and not just making it good

good stuff
singing that dramatically is the only way I can hit those notes :( ...

:) Thank you very much, geekmug.
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Unread post by DustyDave » Sat Nov 22, 2003 9:20 am

Ok on to the critique Sarah , i only have one thing to say , i just listened to the Björk version of that song , and you perform it better !!!!

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