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Original- Been Done Before

Unread post by HumbleMonkey » Fri Sep 15, 2006 1:33 pm

the harp is a little too loud in this one, sorry about that. i had fun with this one, i would say its my most dylanish song i wrote

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Been Done Before

I’ve been thinking about this far too long
Trying to decide what’s right and wrong
I say try to invent what’s really you,
What it is true, what you really do
Being someone else is such a bore
And it’s all been done before

When trying to figure out what I want to say
I figured I could just change my ways
Why not today to be the day
In a time of trouble, world of grey
Trying to find new colors to explore
But it’s all been done before

I’m sick and tired of this war
Guns and bombs and blood and gore
Humans die like it’s a game
I don’t have to tell you of its shame
Fighting now I do abhor
And it’s all been done before

And now we got the middle east
I’m quite sure they’ve never heard of peace
There was this one guy who spoke of being free
They hung him up on a tree
Arrows pierce and cannons roar
But that’s all been done before

We got enough bombs to blow up the world
Over and over again and again
Lets build nukes to defend ourselves
We’ll just do that my blowin’ up everybody else
The mushroom cloud will kill many more
But that’s all been done before

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Unread post by HumbleMonkey » Tue Sep 19, 2006 3:04 pm

sry to top, but anyone anything?

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Unread post by katie » Tue Sep 19, 2006 11:59 pm

hey man that's a bummer no one has replied. I really like it, cool style. I downloaded it last night. the harmonica adds a nice touch. I apologize I thought I responded to this one!

the lyrics are cool the way the wrap around done before is a good twist - your a really good lyricist, dig the tune musically makes me want to grab my friend and do a little quick step while holding a beer ;) that's got to be good right!

give mine a go...

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Re: Original- Been Done Before

Unread post by JonesI15 » Thu Sep 21, 2006 1:52 pm

HumbleMonkey wrote:the harp is a little too loud in this one, sorry about that. i had fun with this one, i would say its my most dylanish song i wrote
Definately Dylanish...I loved the lyrics and everything about it. Keep it up!

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Unread post by HumbleMonkey » Thu Sep 21, 2006 3:35 pm

thanks both of you :D

this verse came to me in class today, you think its worth adding it in? i think i would put it right before the last verse

America plays its games too
trying to fool me and you
The world's police keepin order
Cant even protect its own border
Invading countries, starting wars
But that's all been done before

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