I've never really written originals and I did this last night when I couldn't sleep. Please give it a listen and tell me what you think; whether I should leave some parts out, if its a piece of crap, etc... (and no I'm not one of those people that only wants feedback and never bothers to listen to others' recordings)
I really have to appologize for the audio quality, I used the mic on my mp3 player so it buzzes a bit. It sounds better if you listen through headphones, but what can I say...a note is still a note, even if recorded through a crappy mic. Just imagine its not
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