Original "Passing By"

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HumbleMonkey
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Original "Passing By"

Unread post by HumbleMonkey » Sun Jul 23, 2006 5:04 pm

song: http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?a ... D47F4E32EA

lyrics:


Passing By

Sun goes down, wolves howlin at the moon
All the darkness closes in around you
Light a match, it might just help you see a bit
And take off those shades, it might help too

And I feel a chill going through my bones
And the way the moon is hanging shows
Dreams of old, dreams of new
Over me, over you

All of time passing by
Hungry child in the night does cry
Pass the torch, flame burning anew
No longer for me but now for you

A journey through the dark
My mind lights up with a spark
Spirits wandering, passing through
Oh no, it's left to just me and you

Stay clear stranger, keep your innocence
This fog is for me, keep your purity
And as I lie here on the floor
Please say no if I ask for more

All of time passing by
Hungry child in the night does cry
Pass the torch, flame burning anew
No longer for me but now for you

And if I lie here please extend your hand
I really hope you would act like my friend
Robin Hood stealing for the poor
His friends couldn't ask for more

Jump onto your feet it's time to sing and dance
If you're afraid you might trip, take hold of your pants
Brothers and sisters my hat's off to you
But when I ask you to leave I mean it, I really do

All of time passing by
Hungry child in the night does cry
Pass the torch, flame burning anew
No longer for me but now for you

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Unread post by Appfro » Sun Jul 23, 2006 8:16 pm

the song sounds like a tom petty song. not an insult. i like petty. you have a bit more emotion in the vocals in this one, i just think you need some practice w/ your voice.

your rhythm is better w/ this one too.

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