My first original song

[horsmar15]

Well, it really isn't my first original, but it is the first original i am posting on this board. Also, it is the first song that I have wrote that I haven't really hated a week after I wrote it . The title of the song is change (at least for now until I can think of something better). and i'm still working on my vocals so if they suck ya know why (only been trying to sing for a couple months now). Well, enough of that, give it a listen and tell me what ya think
http://www.angelfire.com/music5/horsmar15/