my version of american baby intro

[rockyall107]

I did this awhile ago...its a first draft...im thinking of laying some electric guitar somewhere in there...the vocals sound far away...im just getting the whole recording thing down...and this was also recorded when i first started singing...but i would love some input...

http://www.sendspace.com/file/8bz900

[rockyall107]

Come on...one response? anything?

[busted7970]

You sound realy good. I guess the only thing is at one point it seemed your vocals got over taken by the insterments. Other then that realy good. Plus I like the build up towards the end. Reminds me of the complete weekend on the rocks version of this song. Realy good keep up the good work. You have a realy good voice.

[rockyall107]

thanks man im actually almost done rerecording it...and its starting to sound a thousand times better...

[Kevin_1313]

I'm not too familiar with this song, but I thought your recording was good. The rhythm was good and I love the intensity you put into your singing. The fadeout at the end sounded good too. I would agree with the previous comment that the instruments overpowered the vocals too much at times, making it a little chaotic. But overall I liked it.