Messing around song I made.

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busted7970
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Messing around song I made.

Unread post by busted7970 » Tue May 16, 2006 3:57 pm

I made a quick song. I was messing around with differnt tunings. Tell me what you think. I know it needs to be cleaned up a little bit. I took my guitar down half a step.

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Unread post by busted7970 » Thu May 18, 2006 8:34 pm

anyone?? :lol:

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Unread post by busted7970 » Mon May 22, 2006 7:25 pm

138 views no comments?? :)

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Unread post by eliot1171 » Tue May 23, 2006 11:34 am

I would like to hear it and critique but the link has expired. Post HERE and it won't expire.
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Unread post by eliot1171 » Tue May 23, 2006 2:47 pm

Simple and relaxing instrumental. Were you planning on adding vocals? I think this would be kind of hard to add lyrics that flow well right to this but it doesn't sound like its finished, am I right? Overall good job and welcome to DMBTabs and the R & C Forum.
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Unread post by dmb_rulz » Tue May 23, 2006 7:29 pm

Yes dont think am going to add vocals to it. I was just messing with a few cords and thats what I came up with. Then just added a little lead riff to it. Then with my keyboard just but some drums. Thanks so much for the comment. :)

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Unread post by busted7970 » Tue May 23, 2006 8:15 pm

Also anytips on mixing? Am still lacking in that skill. :)

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Unread post by eliot1171 » Tue May 23, 2006 11:42 pm

dmb_rulz wrote:Yes dont think am going to add vocals to it. I was just messing with a few cords and thats what I came up with. Then just added a little lead riff to it. Then with my keyboard just but some drums. Thanks so much for the comment. :)
Are you in the right post?

As for mixin. Just play with it but don't get carried away with effects.
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Unread post by busted7970 » Wed May 24, 2006 8:37 am

Opps sorry am not new to here. Just was sick of that name so i changed it. But by mistake logged in under the old name. Anyway thanks for the tip. I hear ya because sometimes i over do effects.

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Unread post by haynes41 » Wed Jun 14, 2006 4:01 pm

can you repost or email this song to me, i'd like to hear it
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