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original my friends....

Unread post by 6_strings_for_life » Fri Mar 31, 2006 3:25 pm

Ok I havnt had anything new here for some time. Here is a song that I just finished. Tell me what you think

http://s51.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=1878 ... T2V7TXR5WO
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Unread post by 6_strings_for_life » Sat Apr 01, 2006 1:47 pm

*crickets*
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Unread post by juineaux » Sat Apr 01, 2006 2:25 pm

I really like this song, it's got an original sound. The guitar part sounds jack johnson-ish, but the vocals remind me of Leaonard Cohen & Tom Waits(two very cool singers). Is there a mando in the backround? or is that a capo-ed acoustic? either way nice work-

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Unread post by 6_strings_for_life » Sat Apr 01, 2006 8:24 pm

Yes there is a mando in the one part, I though it sounded good on there. The acoustic is not capo'd at all. Thanks for the comment and the nice words.
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Unread post by the eyes upon us » Sun Apr 02, 2006 6:33 pm

wow, thats pretty awesome. very original sound, do you have more?
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Unread post by J_Clark » Tue Apr 04, 2006 3:00 pm

one comment i have is at the begining of the song the vocals are in a very low tone. I am not sure that I like this. I guess I thought Jack Johnson because of the chorus and I guess I didnt feel the intro fit. maybe you like it, i dont know, but i think in a higher voice might fit the song better
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Unread post by 6_strings_for_life » Tue Apr 04, 2006 3:13 pm

J_Clark wrote:one comment i have is at the begining of the song the vocals are in a very low tone. I am not sure that I like this. I guess I thought Jack Johnson because of the chorus and I guess I didnt feel the intro fit. maybe you like it, i dont know, but i think in a higher voice might fit the song better
My voice is very low and monotone. I know its somthing that I need to work on. Thanks for the comment
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