another sufjan cover! omg lol

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another sufjan cover! omg lol

Unread post by dmbguitar718 » Sun Jan 15, 2006 10:16 pm

Yeah, I covered Sufjan again. Like my previous one, I recorded this one live. (Not at a show, just guitar + vox all in one take) There are a few obvious flaws, notably in the beginning, but I think it gets better towards the middle and end.

Anyway, feel free to listen and comment.

http://www.s151305233.onlinehome.us/widows.mp3
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Unread post by Cor » Sun Jan 15, 2006 10:22 pm

I liked it. You're right, too, it does get better in the middle and stays great til the end. Nice.
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Unread post by dmbguitar718 » Sun Jan 15, 2006 10:28 pm

Yeah, my main flaw was getting that initial "I have called..." or what have you to start off the verse. I knew I wasn't getting it, but I said fuck it and kept it anyway. :)
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Re: another sufjan cover! omg lol

Unread post by jellyfish » Sun Jan 15, 2006 10:31 pm

dmbguitar718 wrote:Yeah, I covered Sufjan again. Like my previous one, I recorded this one live. (Not at a show, just guitar + vox all in one take) There are a few obvious flaws, notably in the beginning, but I think it gets better towards the middle and end.

Anyway, feel free to listen and comment.

http://www.s151305233.onlinehome.us/widows.mp3
Your voice is getting there. What are you doing to improve it?

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Re: another sufjan cover! omg lol

Unread post by dmbguitar718 » Sun Jan 15, 2006 10:37 pm

jellyfish wrote:
dmbguitar718 wrote:Yeah, I covered Sufjan again. Like my previous one, I recorded this one live. (Not at a show, just guitar + vox all in one take) There are a few obvious flaws, notably in the beginning, but I think it gets better towards the middle and end.

Anyway, feel free to listen and comment.

http://www.s151305233.onlinehome.us/widows.mp3
Your voice is getting there. What are you doing to improve it?
Nothing really, I've just been singing in my range alot.
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Re: another sufjan cover! omg lol

Unread post by jellyfish » Sun Jan 15, 2006 10:42 pm

dmbguitar718 wrote:
jellyfish wrote:
dmbguitar718 wrote:Yeah, I covered Sufjan again. Like my previous one, I recorded this one live. (Not at a show, just guitar + vox all in one take) There are a few obvious flaws, notably in the beginning, but I think it gets better towards the middle and end.

Anyway, feel free to listen and comment.

http://www.s151305233.onlinehome.us/widows.mp3
Your voice is getting there. What are you doing to improve it?
Nothing really, I've just been singing in my range alot.
So you've done absolutely nothing.... it just got better magically? Thanks for the feedback.

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Re: another sufjan cover! omg lol

Unread post by dmbguitar718 » Sun Jan 15, 2006 10:45 pm

jellyfish wrote:
dmbguitar718 wrote:
jellyfish wrote:
dmbguitar718 wrote:Yeah, I covered Sufjan again. Like my previous one, I recorded this one live. (Not at a show, just guitar + vox all in one take) There are a few obvious flaws, notably in the beginning, but I think it gets better towards the middle and end.

Anyway, feel free to listen and comment.

http://www.s151305233.onlinehome.us/widows.mp3
Your voice is getting there. What are you doing to improve it?
Nothing really, I've just been singing in my range alot.
So you've done absolutely nothing.... it just got better magically? Thanks for the feedback.
Haha, pretty much. I think me just sticking in my range and trying to perfect it has helped alot. (rather than trying to make my voice some powerhouse that it isn't.)
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Unread post by Trippin Hillbilly » Mon Jan 16, 2006 3:48 pm

This is great Pat. You have a really good tone in your voice. If you keep working on it, it could be a powerhouse. Just keep at it...your voice is sounding awesome.

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