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Here's are a few lyrics for ya.

Unread post by Teego Time » Tue Jan 10, 2006 5:39 pm

So I'm playing this at open mic tonight. It's fun song, and not so seriouse. Yes I'd love to record it. Do I have the means? No. :cry:

My Little Rhyme

I sat down last night to write a song
But I couldn’t think of anything to go off on
I thought of writing of things that make me mad
But in the end I figured it would only make me sad

Then I thought about writing of things that go wrong
About how we pick up, and how we move on
But who am, I to being giving advice
When I don’t really know what’s right

In my attempts to write something really hot
I struggled inside to get it in the first shot
But what if someone doesn’t really like it
I might get booed of stage, and really throw a fit

But then I decided, I wasn’t gonna take it
I drew the line, I don’t give a shit
About what you think, your dumb opinions
I’m gonna play what I like, and sing to it

Goddamn these boxers, they really itch
I can’t do a thing now, about it
No sense in bitching, doesn’t make any friends
Or getting anything else done in the end

You know what really kind pisses me off
Are those people outside who don’t show off
Their inner beauty, cuz they’re afraid they might
Be rejected by those who they like

Another thing that strikes me as a pain in the ass
Is the guy trying way too hard to pass
As cool in society today
Stop acting like someone your not, cuz that’s fake

But if you think that you’re exempt from this
There’s a point I’ve made that you’ve probably missed
We’re all guilty of it, at some point in time
So please take notice of my little rhyme
Kahn » Mon Mar 14, 2005 10:56 pm
the vaginal fluid they are secreting is the same composition of urine minus the uric acid and phosphorous. i learned that in 11th grade anatomy. btw, sometimes it does have a FAINT smell of Pizzle.

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Unread post by mdel21 » Tue Jan 10, 2006 9:37 pm

make a verse about steroids and balding and you're all set

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