My First Song for critiquing

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My First Song for critiquing

Unread post by RunsWithBuffalo » Sat Dec 03, 2005 3:45 pm

Hi all,

This doesnt have lyrics yet, but im workin on them. So far its two guitar parts, a little piano, and a drum track. its all kinda mellow, but let me know what you think

If anyone has any suggestions on how to add a little variation, that would be greatly appreciated

http://s53.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=15FS ... W2CVVM75TO

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Unread post by Cor » Sun Dec 04, 2005 12:44 pm

Sounds like a good start. Get some lyrics and a leading melody on there, it will be pretty cool.
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Unread post by RunsWithBuffalo » Mon Dec 05, 2005 2:51 am

thanks, im close to having lyrics and a melody, probably another day or two. Anyone else? 60 views and 1 response?
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