So damn lucky

[DropD-MB]

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[DMBguitaristJMB]

I recorded so damn lucky with words.

the only porblem is a was sick and I suck at singing so dont laugh.


I recorded it for the guitar.


http://www.angelfire.com/oz/dmbguitarist0/sodamn2.mp3

[fatjack]

hmmm

you need to work on the rhythm a lot. it sounds like you are chopping up your strums and you need to keep and even strum pattern.

and you really weren't singing, more like talking

[Appfro]

ok, im just goign to give you suggestions on how to improve.
first of all, i would suggest a metronome. these are key when starting to play. they really help w/ getting rhythm on. your actual guitar stuff wasnt' bad, you hit the right chords and stuff, you just gotta work on the rhythm.

vocals, they need work. im not really sure what you can do other than practice. practice while goign down the road in your car and don't talk, sing w/ it. like fatjack said, you're kinda talking and not singing. also, you may wanna try multitrack. im not sure how you recorded, but im thinking guitar and vocals at the same time? try doing them at different times for now. good luck, keep practicing.