New Song: "Without a word"

[superman0710]

It's called "Without a Word"

It's about love at first sight, which is a concept which has always fascinated me. How can you just see someone and instantly be drawn to them? Anyway

Here's the Link:

http://www.13thousand.com/withoutaword.mp3


And here are the lyrics


with her fashioned clothes
and her maked-up face
it's love at first sight
it's a charrade
and do you like my smile?
and do you like my style?
and will you slow it down?
and will we talk a while?

and why
without a word
am i falling fast
am i unaware

and why
without a word
am i falling fast
do you even care?

but you don't

with just a glance
i dream of romance
i'd give a million things
if i could have the chance
and do i know your name?
and are we both the same?
and it's a bit insane.
but this is just a game.

and why
without the sound of your voice
do i know i want to spend my time with you

and why
without the scent of your hair
do i know how much i'd really care.

and why
without a word
am i falling fast
am i unaware

and why
without a word
am i falling fast
do you even care?

but you don't
but you make it look beautiful
and you make it look good
and you make it look beautiful






Let me know what you think

[SingLike_Dave]

Hey Bro,

Good tune. Since no one else seems ta want to reply


You didnt record that home did ya?
what u use to add that "hollow" sound to your voice.

You should sing an octave higher/
I can tell your holding back

I used to be the same.

[mdel21]

That middle part where you say "but you don't
but you make it look beautiful
and you make it look good
and you make it look beautiful" over and over I didn't like.

I like the lyrics though and the chords. Your voice seems forced in some spots

[superman0710]

Hey Bro,

Good tune. Since no one else seems ta want to reply


You didnt record that home did ya?
what u use to add that "hollow" sound to your voice.

You should sing an octave higher/
I can tell your holding back

I used to be the same.

yes sir, recorded at home on my korg d-1600 with an audio technica 3035 condenser mic. just a little reverb, and voila! thanks to both of you for the feed back