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Sketch- Critique needed!

Unread post by matonfan101 » Sat Oct 08, 2005 5:50 am

This is a brand spankin' new song. Just got it down, its very rough. Just ignore the mistakes. Interested for suggestions etc

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Unread post by paulaitchison » Mon Oct 10, 2005 6:49 am

wow really enjoyed that,
like rythem guitar (very dave-esque)
but nice that you through in some fills...i wish dave did that a bit,
your vocals are good, your voice sounds like a mix of eddie vetter from pearl jam and the guy from incubus, they could be turned up a bit?
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Unread post by brandtmarc » Mon Oct 10, 2005 8:18 am

Incredible dude!

I really enjoyed that, if you ever make another song, make sure to send it to: brandtmarc@gmail.com
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Unread post by Appfro » Fri Oct 14, 2005 11:18 am

very groovy man. your guitar is pretty bad ass, really made me tap my feet. you kind of have a rob thomas meets dave thing going w/ your voice.

i really liked it. my only critique is that you missed a few on the vocals. nothing really serious but you struggle w/ some of the lower notes. i really enjoyed it. :thumbsup:
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Unread post by matonfan101 » Fri Oct 14, 2005 10:42 pm

thanks all for the positive feedback
i'll try get some more stuff up in the future
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Unread post by EnFuego » Sun Oct 16, 2005 3:26 pm

yousendit has expired. I would like to listen to this if you get a chance to put it back up
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Unread post by TaylorGuy110 » Sun Oct 16, 2005 4:49 pm

EnFuego wrote:yousendit has expired. I would like to listen to this if you get a chance to put it back up
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Unread post by Appfro » Sun Oct 16, 2005 5:41 pm

http://s47.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=08EF ... NDDRLXXSUC

i still had it on my computer. hope you don't mind dude.
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Unread post by bighuk » Sun Oct 16, 2005 8:59 pm

diggin it bro...
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Unread post by mangold » Tue Oct 18, 2005 5:47 pm

i like this alot but the guitar and the vocals seem to contradict eachother, them guitar track has a very upbeat feel and the vocals are very rolling and mello saddish... still very awesome... keep it up
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Unread post by eliot1171 » Fri Oct 21, 2005 3:11 pm

Nice, sounds very dave'y. kinda like Stay or Leave which is one of my faves. It is very original too though. good job, clean it up and post it again.
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