*****The Ultimate Original Song Competition II*****

Post recordings you have made here and get feedback from the community. Songwriting topics would also reside here.

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Unread post by longleggedfrog » Fri Sep 23, 2005 7:12 am

smedley,
too much time, people will all wait until the last minute.[/quote]
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Unread post by smedley » Fri Sep 23, 2005 1:13 pm

freshead16 wrote:you get my votes? Ive never sent an email through outlook before.
no man, i didn't


and kenny, you're right man, i'm just getting worried cause like 2 people voted so far, oh well
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Unread post by smedley » Sun Sep 25, 2005 8:24 am

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Unread post by Appfro » Sun Sep 25, 2005 4:11 pm

well, as far as the music goes i have to say this was an awesome competition. but i'm very very disapointed in the board's participation as far as critiques go. it's sad to know that the people of dmbtabs for the most part have stopped listening to people's music. oh well, thank a million for those of you who took 20 min out of your life to critique us. we appreciate it.

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Unread post by longleggedfrog » Mon Sep 26, 2005 4:27 pm

Probably should start a new thread on thursday/friday.....as a re-reminder.
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Unread post by bpongo09 » Mon Sep 26, 2005 4:49 pm

can you repost the songs? all of them cept pat's are expired

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Unread post by smedley » Mon Sep 26, 2005 8:24 pm

alrighty
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Unread post by carter29 » Mon Sep 26, 2005 9:01 pm

I voted, I had a big critique out then the internet messed up and the window closed, but still voted
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Unread post by GreedylilPig » Wed Sep 28, 2005 4:06 pm

Don't have time to critique them all now... I'll try to do one at a time off and on.

Apps - Miracle... great job, man. You've written a great song here and you really have something to be proud of. I love the simplicity of the lyric, "I'm so glad to see you," especially intertwined with the more complex, poetical writing. Great acoustic feel to this song - gets the foot tapping. I do have to say, however, that the vocals became weaker toward the end of the 3rd minute but got stronger toward the end. Nice abrupt ending, by the way. Works well. My compliments, my compliments.
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Unread post by myxomatosis » Wed Sep 28, 2005 4:52 pm

Appfro wrote:well, as far as the music goes i have to say this was an awesome competition. but i'm very very disapointed in the board's participation as far as critiques go. it's sad to know that the people of dmbtabs for the most part have stopped listening to people's music. oh well, thank a million for those of you who took 20 min out of your life to critique us. we appreciate it.

I used to listen to everyones stuff except the dmb covers... but now my connection is too slow :(

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Unread post by Appfro » Wed Sep 28, 2005 8:00 pm

GreedylilPig wrote:Don't have time to critique them all now... I'll try to do one at a time off and on.

Apps - Miracle... great job, man. You've written a great song here and you really have something to be proud of. I love the simplicity of the lyric, "I'm so glad to see you," especially intertwined with the more complex, poetical writing. Great acoustic feel to this song - gets the foot tapping. I do have to say, however, that the vocals became weaker toward the end of the 3rd minute but got stronger toward the end. Nice abrupt ending, by the way. Works well. My compliments, my compliments.
hey thanks man. i really really appreciate that :)

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Unread post by smedley » Fri Sep 30, 2005 1:16 pm

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Unread post by Appfro » Fri Sep 30, 2005 1:25 pm

forget it man. no one else is goign to listen. the people that care have spoken. just go ahead and release the 2 votes.

you know what, nevermind that, who cares who won. the music was good enough. cheers to the ones who entered the contest, you guys fucking rock!!!

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Unread post by GreedylilPig » Fri Sep 30, 2005 2:55 pm

Sarah - Foolish... just beautiful. I've always been a huge fan of your voice. In this particular tune, your voice reminds me of a mix between Paul Simon (personal favorite) and Elliot Smith. I felt the vocal blends did a lot for the song, but still find myself curious to hear it with one straight vocal track. I'd also love to see the lyrics. I was able to make out most of them, but would just like to clarify.

Tranman66 - Enjoyed it quite a bit. Brilliant at some points, somewhat sloppy at others, enjoyable nonetheless. Some constructive criticism (I hope), is that the song seems to lack a refrain. At points just seems like random playing. Fine playing, don't get me wrong, just not all that cohesive. Particularly enjoyed the piece from 2:30 onward.
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Unread post by freshead16 » Fri Sep 30, 2005 7:38 pm

Appfro wrote:forget it man. no one else is goign to listen. the people that care have spoken. just go ahead and release the 2 votes.

you know what, nevermind that, who cares who won. the music was good enough. cheers to the ones who entered the contest, you guys fucking rock!!!
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