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Unread post by jsgksu » Tue Sep 09, 2003 10:42 pm

Hey guys, been a while since I was a regular but between my girl and school I havent had a lot of free time. Anyway I wrote this song over the summer and finally got a recording of it up. Wussy Disclaimer: I did it in one take and mess up noticeably a few times but aside from the obvious mistakes Id like some feedback. I wrote the song about a month ago so it could still be a work in progress if I find more shit that flows with it good. Hopefully my friend who writes lyrics/sings to my songs can do something with it soon and I can post that but until then what do you think of it. Thanks to anyone who takes the time to listen/critique.

Been a while guys, Im retarded sorry, heres the link: http://www.angelfire.com/pa5/jsgksu/ Download the one titled New One
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Unread post by DMBFan63 » Tue Sep 09, 2003 10:46 pm

erm.. theres no link for the song..
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Unread post by everydayDMBfan_18 » Tue Sep 09, 2003 10:48 pm

Someone hit the bong one too many times :)
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Unread post by dmbguitar718 » Tue Sep 09, 2003 10:53 pm

Nice. I like the lead. :)
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Unread post by jsgksu » Tue Sep 09, 2003 11:00 pm

everydayDMBfan_18 wrote:Someone hit the bong one too many times :)
I dont smoke but Ive been drinkin way too much since I got back down to school, maybe thats the problem.
dmbguitar718 wrote:Nice. I like the lead.
Did you actually find the song before I put up the link or was that sarcasm?
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Unread post by jsgksu » Wed Sep 10, 2003 10:03 pm

I think my site was down earlier, its working now though. Has anyone listened to it, Id really like some feedback from you guys, especially from the real good guys on here that always post songs for us. Its not a very difficult song or anything but its one of my top favorites of songs Ive written. If it goes down and some one wants I can send it to them over aol, my names jsgksu on there too, but I doubt anyone wants it that bad. Anyways, check it out and let me know, thanks.
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Unread post by Ranting Thespian » Thu Sep 11, 2003 5:23 am

don't worry, downloading it now. I'll liten to it and post right away :) .
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Unread post by jsgksu » Thu Sep 11, 2003 10:41 am

Shes workin again, someone whos gonna give me some feedback please listen before it goes off again. Im stuck in on a thursday night studying for a Sociology test and I need something to take my mind off it for a few minutes.
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Unread post by Appfro » Thu Sep 11, 2003 11:27 am

ill trade you, listen to yours it you'll listen to mine :D j/k.

i really am listening now, if i don't get a reply up now, it'll be tonight. cause i got school :cry:
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Unread post by Trippin Hillbilly » Thu Sep 11, 2003 1:50 pm

Argh! Temporarily suspended........... angelfire should be shot!

I'll try again tonight..
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Unread post by blaze » Fri Sep 12, 2003 8:46 pm

I like it man. make sure you repost when your friend pts lyricks to it. Girlfriend and school should be no excuse to slackin on your guit playin' :D just toyin ya
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Unread post by jsgksu » Sat Sep 13, 2003 12:17 am

blaze wrote:I like it man. make sure you repost when your friend pts lyricks to it. Girlfriend and school should be no excuse to slackin on your guit playin' :D just toyin ya
Thanks man, anyone else listen, its been up for a while and this is the first response I got. Id like a little more then just "sounds good", anyone wanna critique it a little more or tell me why the like it/dont like it. Thanks for listening though.
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Unread post by isaac » Sat Sep 13, 2003 12:24 am

yeah...it definitely sounds incomplete without the lyrics/singing, because you can immediately tell it was meant to be sung. very uptempo song and i like it a lot...just get some vocals in there and i'll be able to give you more of a critique. :)
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Unread post by scott_fash » Sat Sep 13, 2003 11:39 am

Yeah man, the guitar is real good. Just spend some time thinking up some good lyrics and that song can be money. :lol:
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