Some lyrics I wrote

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twostepthis
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Some lyrics I wrote

Unread post by twostepthis » Tue Jul 19, 2005 1:12 pm

Destroy them... but suggestions are appreciated too.


I want you to know
Don’t want you to go
And leave me hear alone

When your not here
Day turns to night
And I am filled with freight

When you leave
I cannot dream
The weight carries me down

Deep into the sea
Where I cannot breathe
Please come back to me

The moon chases the sun
Right from the sky
Leaves me standing cold

Screaming in the dark
And now I feel
That when you’re gone

All I can see
Is blackness ‘round me
And the time draws near

When He will come
And weigh my soul
Find me lacking

But then the world
Takes hold of me
And I will not find peace

Till you’re here
Sleeping with me
I’ll forget that time

I want you to know
I love you so
Please stay here with me

I fall on my knees
Begging you please
It sure does seem
Like God has forsaken me

Weren’t we meant to be
Why can’t you see

Stop tearing at my soul
I would give all
Just to be free

You’ve forgotten me
He’s forsaken me
You left me
He laughs at me
I’m asking you please
You’ve forgotten me
He’s forsaken me
You left me
He laughs at me
I’m asking God please

twostepthis
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Joined: Mon Dec 29, 2003 7:49 pm

Unread post by twostepthis » Tue Jul 19, 2005 1:25 pm

fright not freight.... haha

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