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Newest Original: Dig a Grave.

Unread post by superman0710 » Fri Jun 10, 2005 9:10 pm

Conceived, written, and recorded in one night. (today 6/10/05 @ approx 2:30am)

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http://www.13thousand.com/digagrave.mp3
Lyrics:

1
and i'm falling after you
breaking down to the lonely sound of me
but my heart can't take another mistake
that i'm making chasing you
and i'll miss you , when you're gone
but it's time that i move on

chorus
and i've got to forget the past
and i've got to dig a grave someplace
where the memories inside of me
can lie in peace

2
and the images mounted on the frames are haunting
but i can't bring myself to throw them all away
it's like a looking glass i should be looking past,
but i can't stop looking back
and now i'll forget

chorus
and i've got to forget the past
and i've got to dig a grave someplace
where the memories inside of me
can lie in peace

bridge
and i'm not lying to myself
when i clear your things up off my shelf
and i know you had a piece of me
but i know it's not a piece i need

3
i'll have one last drink before i leave this place
i'll pay my tab, i'm not looking back again
we may meet somewhere, we may share a stare or a smile
but i'm not thinking about you for a while.

chorus
and i've got to forget the past
and i've got to dig a grave someplace
where the memories inside of me
can lie in peace

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Unread post by i like tictacs » Fri Jun 10, 2005 10:53 pm

No correlation to gravedigger, eh?

I like your voice. The guitar part is a bit weak, but it actually does a very good job throughout the song i think, it supports the vocals nicely. good job :-D
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Unread post by GreyBlueAnt » Sat Jun 11, 2005 12:12 am

really like it. ditch the second guitar and get some cello or some violin in there. I'm keeping this one.
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Unread post by superman0710 » Sat Jun 11, 2005 2:06 am

GreyBlueAnt wrote:really like it. ditch the second guitar and get some cello or some violin in there. I'm keeping this one.
i really like that cello, violin idea. i'll work at that!

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