my #41 finally works

borocks · Unread post by **borocks** » Sat Aug 23, 2003 9:13 am

I've finally managed to upload my version of #41.
http://www.angelfire.com/un/borocks/songs.html

I hope you all like it, tell me what you think of it

Peace, Bo.

Appfro · Unread post by **Appfro** » Sat Aug 23, 2003 10:27 am

lol, suspended. i feel your pain man, i can't post crap on this site w/o it getting suspended. ill come back in a couple hours and give you my 2 cents though. later

scott_fash · Unread post by **scott_fash** » Sat Aug 23, 2003 11:07 am

still doesn't work buddy

DMBFan63 · Unread post by **DMBFan63** » Sat Aug 23, 2003 11:09 am

I heard it and it sounded good bud, thanks for the listen

borocks · Unread post by **borocks** » Sat Aug 23, 2003 11:20 am

still doesn't work buddy

it's working, it's still on the server, but you can't get because the index-page is temporarly down.

Here's the direct link
http://www.k-web.ch/funline/41.mp3

DmbFanJason · Unread post by **DmbFanJason** » Sat Aug 23, 2003 12:26 pm

you actually do have a pretty good voice...just sometimes it sounds off or weird because, english isn't your first language? guitar work sounded pretty solid as well...I liked it, good job.

borocks · Unread post by **borocks** » Sat Aug 23, 2003 1:22 pm

yeah that's right.

my first language is german, I try to sing accurate to Dave, but as you said, sometimes it sounds kinda weird...

Appfro · Unread post by **Appfro** » Sat Aug 23, 2003 4:09 pm

sounding wierd or not, good job on the vocals. way to hit those high notes in the second verse. you really do have a good voice, and you really don't have that much accent. you can hear it every once in a while, but for the most part, you sound like any of us.

The guitar part was good too. easy song so there isn't much to mess up. i think your strumming pattern may have been just a little unnatural (if that's a word). seemed a little hasty in places.

overall very good. id say be a little more natural on your strumming pattern and keep up the singing. im looking forward to hearing more stuff from you.

EDIT: I realize now that im reading my review that the natural part of the strumming may not make sense. what i mean is to loosen it up a little. keep your arm in a continuous motion, the tempo of your arm shouldn't really change in the song at all unless the song calls for it. this one doens't really. i hope that helps.

borocks · Unread post by **borocks** » Sun Aug 24, 2003 5:15 am

Thanx for your comment, man, I greatly appreciate that when people really take some time to listen to the song and tell you what they liked and liked less.
I'm currently downloading your Two Step Cover and obviously gonna tell you what I think of it.

Keep it up.
Peace, Bo

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