Long time since last recording, but here it is. Critique :-)

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Long time since last recording, but here it is. Critique :-)

Unread post by Tranman66 » Fri May 27, 2005 8:23 pm

Hey, i havent been around for a while, so i figure to post something to get myself back to it.

Listen to Dreams, this was a while ago, it was fun to make.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/thekmtmusic.htm
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Unread post by Kahn » Fri May 27, 2005 11:17 pm

I really like it. Nice and mellow, relaxes me. Timing could use some brush up, and the lead guitar sounds a tiny bit out of tune to me. It gets a little repetitive. Chalk it up to a lack of vocals, though. Nice little tune you got there. :thumbsup:
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Unread post by Tranman66 » Fri May 27, 2005 11:20 pm

yeah i agree with you on the timing and a bit out of tune. It was a jam, i didnt write out the lead. Thanks
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Unread post by colinclippard » Tue May 31, 2005 1:13 pm

Weak Vocals good guitar
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