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Rubinster
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Unread post by Rubinster » Tue May 17, 2005 1:54 pm

I just recorded this little cover of WAYG. Some opinions would be much appreciated cos I still can't assess my voice very well.

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Unread post by EnFuego » Tue May 17, 2005 3:15 pm

listening to it now...
not bad at all. Guitar: pretty good for the most part. I would work on the "jam" part. starting at around 2:28. Get more of a strumming feel to it rather than picking individual notes (mute the other strings to hit the correct notes). Voice: Also good overall. It is very mellow for the most part which is good for this song.
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Unread post by Rubinster » Thu May 19, 2005 7:11 am

Thanks, sounds like a good idea :) Anyone else please?
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Unread post by Elliottman » Thu May 19, 2005 1:19 pm

Good guitar man, finger picked version of this always sounds better!
I cant critique voice cause to be honest i just dont like people covering Dave Songs. Thats just my opinion though and my opinion counts for Shit! Ha Ha
Good job though!
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Unread post by Swede » Thu May 19, 2005 4:35 pm

i liked it.. your voice sounds good.. keep posting
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Unread post by Rubinster » Mon May 23, 2005 3:19 am

Thank you! Any more opinions?
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Unread post by topgun17 » Mon May 23, 2005 8:54 pm

that was nice my freind keep up the good work and make more posts
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