my cover of collide

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musicman007
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my cover of collide

Unread post by musicman007 » Sat Apr 23, 2005 12:37 pm

okay, did this fast- just in one take.

let me know what you all think??

thanks

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Unread post by Chadrap127 » Sun Apr 24, 2005 2:22 pm

not too shabby... BTW whered u get the tab?? like for the lead guitar and shit... not just those chords.. like the chello part or w/e

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Unread post by mangold » Sun Apr 24, 2005 4:30 pm

to be honest i like the song better when its clean. the lead guitar is pretty decent. the voclas seems a bit off key to me. you seem to be goin too low at the end of the verse lines. then you go too high in the chorus i think...

overall not bad. keep workin and keep postin
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Unread post by musicman007 » Sun Apr 24, 2005 9:45 pm

never used a tab just picked it all out?

And just wondering what did you mean by liking it "clean"

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Unread post by Batstone » Mon Apr 25, 2005 9:27 am

clean meaning no distortion... like acoustic i guess.. or just going with an electric right thru an amp.
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Unread post by Appfro » Mon Apr 25, 2005 1:05 pm

work on your vocals. the music wasn't bad at all, but you really gotta work on the vocals.

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Unread post by juineaux » Mon Apr 25, 2005 1:16 pm

I like the tone of your vocals, but you just get a little off pitch during parts of the song. Overall sounded pretty good though-

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Unread post by musicman007 » Mon Apr 25, 2005 9:38 pm

thanks for the comments all.

it is clean, just a cheap mic is all

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