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This is my first attempt at creating someting on my own where i fingerpicked or anything along those lines. Ive only included the verse and the chorus, still havent arranged it all, its about a minute long so give it a listen and tell me what you think i can do with it. Thanks in advance.

its the song called pop

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/1/funky ... emusic.htm

[borocks]

The guitar riff sounds good so far, but dude you should work something out. work out some lyrics and make a recording. I'm sure it'll sound cool.
It's easier to judge a fully-fledged song with guitar AND vocals than it is to judge just a guitar riff.

[a1075dd63aa12]

The guitar riff sounds good so far, but dude you should work something out. work out some lyrics and make a recording. I'm sure it'll sound cool.
It's easier to judge a fully-fledged song with guitar AND vocals than it is to judge just a guitar riff.

agreed, i dont have a mic to sing, i have a garageband cable

[gumbomadness]

well, the guitar part seems pretty basic, meaning theres nothing really special or uber-original about it. It seems like a basic little progression you know...
if you DO sing, this has potential to be a good song, if not, definitley add some variation to it, or layer some fills on it so it doesnt seem as simplistic.

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