New Original "Another Day"

[dmbmonkeytree]

Hey guys, check out one of my originals. Again this is still me trying to get used to the recording program so check it out and let me know what you think!


check it out here

[dmbmonkeytree]

Any feedback would be greatly appreciated!

[fatjack]

was a pretty tight song, but it kinda fell through in some places... the progression was somewhat unique, but the strumming pattern was pretty normal and common...

your voice fell a little flat when you tried to hit those higher registers. don't strain to hit notes out of your range... you need to learn proper techniques for expanding your range (if youy don't already). for the most part though, your voice was on

the highlight of the song was the cool vocal harmonies you had, they just needed to be a little quieter, they drowned out your lead vocal for a second or two...

overall it's a pretty good job, on a ten point scale... i give a 7

[dmbmonkeytree]

Thanks a lot man. I did notice most of the things you were mentioning, I plan to redo this song but I wanted to get something up for people to listen too. I deffinately need to redo vocals and not go flat cause I cringe everytime I hear the vocals go flat. Also I want to redo the improv guitar, especially in the beginning. Thanks a lot for your input!