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borocks
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by borocks » Tue Jan 18, 2005 2:25 pm
Hi everyone
This is one of my first original songs. I thought I'd post it so you can have a listen if you like. Please note that I'm not a native English speaker, so the lyrics might be crap IYO...
Drop me a short line or something. Any comment would be appreciated.
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http://s19.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=1S0H ... Q8QVDCQAAY<a href=http://www.bosmusikwelt.ch.vu>my music</a>
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by eliot1171 » Tue Jan 18, 2005 5:25 pm
Good job. I like the guitar parts a lot. As for the singing, you have a great voice for that song. Don't worry about dialects, no one care's...It makes singers unique. I thought the lyrics were solid.
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by Tranman66 » Tue Jan 18, 2005 5:45 pm
Who cares if you dont sound american/english. Your influence does you good. I like the melody. THis is pretty good. Damm nice guitar and tone. I like it a lot.
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