Little Jazz Jam

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Little Jazz Jam

Unread post by filmdude100cms » Sat Jan 15, 2005 11:58 pm

http://www.cottonmouthstudios.com/jazz_jam.mp3

somethin new just reworked it tonight, figured id put it up. itd be better with johnny playing bass, and someone soloing... but its just me, threw in some improv to mix stuff up, by no means perfect... oh and i threw in a stop baby outro tease for the hell of it. oh and i also did a mikes song tease.

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Unread post by gumbomadness » Sun Jan 16, 2005 12:10 am

it was good. But definitley repetative and long. I say its gonna be REALLY great once you put the johnny bass man and let someone solo in it.
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Unread post by filmdude100cms » Sun Jan 16, 2005 10:17 am

thanks gumbi (thats what ill call you from now on)
really i just need yall to critique the main stuff, anything i dont do more than once is just improv thrown in to make it less monotonous without my friends acompaning it.

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Unread post by YOYOYOYO » Mon Jan 17, 2005 10:41 am

Little too repetitive for me.

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Unread post by dmbguitar718 » Mon Jan 17, 2005 1:08 pm

there's nothing really to critique. it's just you strumming some random chords for 6 minutes. not very intersting. try mixing it up.
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Unread post by filmdude100cms » Mon Jan 17, 2005 6:19 pm

yeah this is really just a base for a jam, i needed someone on bass, and a lead guitar, but didnt have that at the time.

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Unread post by MWR » Mon Jan 17, 2005 8:01 pm

The base of a jam is called a song. :wink:

This held my interest for about thirty seconds. Try writing something that's a minute long and has some strong thematic interest. From there you can go off on a tangent but a tangent by itself is eye gougingly boring and excessive.

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Unread post by gumbomadness » Mon Jan 17, 2005 9:16 pm

MWR wrote:The base of a jam is called a song. :wink:

This held my interest for about thirty seconds. Try writing something that's a minute long and has some strong thematic interest. From there you can go off on a tangent but a tangent by itself is eye gougingly boring and excessive.
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Unread post by a1075dd63aa12 » Mon Jan 17, 2005 9:32 pm

MWR wrote:The base of a jam is called a song. :wink:

This held my interest for about thirty seconds. Try writing something that's a minute long and has some strong thematic interest. From there you can go off on a tangent but a tangent by itself is eye gougingly boring and excessive.
agreed

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