2 covers and 1 original

[TheLastDodoBird]

Decided to redo the Two Step cover, then throw down on a Song That Jane Likes cover, just for fun. I think I've made some improvements, but am fully aware that there are more necessary, so lemme know whatcha think.

Two Step:

http://www.angelfire.com/band2/lastdodo ... _Step3.mp3

Song That Jane Likes:

http://www.angelfire.com/band2/lastdodo ... _STJL1.mp3

Original song:

http://www.angelfire.com/band2/lastdodo ... itled1.mp3


Sorry, angelfire doesn't allow direct linking, so just copy/paste the links. Anyways, mic quality is absolute shit, but lemme know whatcha think anyways (especially with my vocals, eesh). Thanks.

[eliot1171]

Good job on the guitar part on two step… I think that’s kind of a hard song to sing, so I’m not going to comment on the vocals.

Again, good job with the guitar on Jane…Try and make this song more distinct by emphasizing your vocals…. It’ll live’n it up.

I like the tone of your original, it’s more rock like…we need a little more of that one the boards…Have you begun writing vocals for it? My only critique is that it’s a bit repetitive…. Give it some variation and it’ll sound fine.

As far as your vocals go…. I’d like to hear you sing some higher songs, not a lot higher but a little. Let yourself go, it seems to me your holding back.