new original tune: Chill

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new original tune: Chill

Unread post by mangold » Tue Jan 11, 2005 6:35 pm

i made it cause i was bored. any opinions on ways i can improve are appreiciated. muchas gracias in advancas.

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Unread post by MWR » Tue Jan 11, 2005 8:03 pm

Oh lord.

Chicki fricki boom ah. Boom fraka chick biki boom oh ah.

Sorry but this made me laugh more than anything.
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Unread post by mangold » Tue Jan 11, 2005 8:07 pm

i thought it twas funny too.
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Unread post by Tranman66 » Tue Jan 11, 2005 9:49 pm

hmm lol, yeah .

when the beat enters the strumming, it sounds really off, but it comes together 10 secs later.

this is good. I like it. get some bongos if you're gonna drum like that. the lead is simple, but not bad.

nice feel to the song after the first minute.
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Unread post by mangold » Tue Jan 11, 2005 9:50 pm

thanks for the comment tranny
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Unread post by hofdaddy » Wed Jan 12, 2005 4:46 pm

Guitar was good.

I wanna hump now with all the chicka chicka boom bap. Maybe put that more in the background than in the front and it should be a winner. Bongo's would definately be a good addition instead of whatever is being beat upon.
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Unread post by mangold » Wed Jan 12, 2005 5:39 pm

hofdaddy wrote:Guitar was good.

I wanna hump now with all the chicka chicka boom bap. Maybe put that more in the background than in the front and it should be a winner. Bongo's would definately be a good addition instead of whatever is being beat upon.
its me smackin my guitar, and i would very much like bongos, thanks for the comments
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Unread post by Ryeguy » Wed Jan 12, 2005 6:09 pm

It sounds like stay or leave from the album.
Its like... getting two birds stoned at once. (Ricky-trailor park boys).
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Unread post by mangold » Wed Jan 12, 2005 6:11 pm

hmmm, it does have a similar sound... strumming pattern i guess
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Unread post by Ryeguy » Wed Jan 12, 2005 7:42 pm

I was thinking more your voice. Dave Matthews does that same thing in the studio version of stay or leave... i think during the chorus
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Unread post by mangold » Wed Jan 12, 2005 7:43 pm

Ryeguy wrote:I was thinking more your voice. Dave Matthews does that same thing in the studio version of stay or leave... i think during the chorus
oh ok, i hear it now...
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