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superman0710 · Unread post by **superman0710** » Mon Dec 02, 2002 12:44 am

here is a song i'm working on, it's pretty much complete, i just gotta add the vocals, but i need some opinions on what you think.....

i'm posting two versions of the almost finalized product, one with an electric guitar solo and another with a solo i did on my keyboard.....tell me which one you like more and what you think of the song in general.

Version 1 ( Electric Guitar Solo ):
http://www.rampromotions.com/guitar.mp3

Version 2 ( Keyboard Solo ):
http://www.rampromotions.com/keyboard.mp3

MattyTrane · Unread post by **MattyTrane** » Mon Dec 02, 2002 9:03 am

Cool

gcom007 · Unread post by **gcom007** » Mon Dec 02, 2002 11:04 am

it would be a lot better without the electric guitar fills in my opinion...electric guitar in an acoustic only song don't work well to begin with, but even so, I just don't think it's the right sound...and I don't like either of the solos much either...it could be because it needs a band, but to me I never think electric fits well with just an acoustic guitar...especially if it's not an ultra clean electric. the song is pretty cool, but in my opinion I think you ought to rethink your fills and both solos...

DmbFanJason · Unread post by **DmbFanJason** » Mon Dec 02, 2002 4:31 pm

wow, that was pretty good...honestly, i dont see why some of these songs out there are played on the radio, and yours isnt...i think you need to put some lyrics in...later

MattyTrane · Unread post by **MattyTrane** » Mon Dec 02, 2002 5:57 pm

I think its good, when can you show us the finished product?

gravedigger · Unread post by **gravedigger** » Mon Dec 02, 2002 6:35 pm

superman0710 wrote:here is a song i'm working on, it's pretty much complete, i just gotta add the vocals, but i need some opinions on what you think.....

i'm posting two versions of the almost finalized product, one with an electric guitar solo and another with a solo i did on my keyboard.....tell me which one you like more and what you think of the song in general.

Version 1 ( Electric Guitar Solo ):
http://www.rampromotions.com/guitar.mp3

Version 2 ( Keyboard Solo ):
http://www.rampromotions.com/keyboard.mp3

version 1: sounds like John Mayer. sort of. maybe cause you're playing 7th chords or 9th chords or whatever they are. The petal stuff is cool but I don't think it fits extremely well with the acoustic rhythm parts. I don't mind electric fills over acoustic stuff as long as it's clean and not to crazy with effects. Be sure to finish this one, eh? it sounds good.

version 2: same as above, except that I like this keyboard solo, more than the electric solo. just my .02 bucks

peace,
Ken

Jmz5 · Unread post by **Jmz5** » Mon Dec 02, 2002 10:41 pm

Sounds good my man. Thats some serious talent. Just needs some good vocals. You can almost hear them. Actually I take back saying it sounded good, it sounded fricken awesome. I played it like 5 times and am now trying to figure out the chords.

MattyTrane · Unread post by **MattyTrane** » Mon Dec 02, 2002 11:17 pm

i liked the background just fine, i think i liked the keyboard a bit more, i guess it just seemed to fit in better.

superman0710 · Unread post by **superman0710** » Mon Dec 02, 2002 11:35 pm

i'll put up the final product by the end of next week, i'm glad you guys like what you hear

thanks for all the input and keep on!

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