My Rhyme & Reason Cover....Please Critique

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My Rhyme & Reason Cover....Please Critique

Unread post by Dheibs » Mon Jan 03, 2005 2:35 am

take i look at this please, i know at the end i fucked up and sung the wrong lyrics but its decent i think....thanks

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Unread post by EnFuego » Mon Jan 03, 2005 2:58 am

the link is wrong
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Unread post by gumbomadness » Mon Jan 03, 2005 3:00 am

hehehehehehe
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Unread post by Dheibs » Mon Jan 03, 2005 3:04 am

fuck, k hold up im getitn a new one
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Unread post by Dheibs » Mon Jan 03, 2005 3:06 am

http://s15.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=0RVZ ... YYVB2O0SPE

that should work
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Unread post by DMBFan63 » Mon Jan 03, 2005 3:07 am

that's a big fuckin' file.
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Unread post by Dheibs » Mon Jan 03, 2005 3:11 am

well fuck i need a red bull...what do u do to decrease it? hhahaha
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Unread post by DMBFan63 » Mon Jan 03, 2005 3:12 am

Compress it..don't worry about it.

Work on singing. Other than that it sounded solid
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Unread post by Dheibs » Mon Jan 03, 2005 3:14 am

k one last thing, sorry to keep bugging you but what do i need to do to improve my singing, like what was bad about it besides the lyrics fuck up? thanks
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Unread post by DMBFan63 » Mon Jan 03, 2005 3:20 am

Dheibs wrote:k one last thing, sorry to keep bugging you but what do i need to do to improve my singing, like what was bad about it besides the lyrics fuck up? thanks
I didn't notice the lyric fuck up. Umm..You just seem to have no emotion.I'd also like to say I just farted and it smells really bad.Most of the time you stayed on key(not really staying in the same key as the song with your vocals, but they seemed to stay in the same key the whole time.)Just try to sound more like you care about the song. Give it emotion.
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Unread post by Dheibs » Mon Jan 03, 2005 3:22 am

alright, thanks alot man, i appreciate it...im also glad i cant smell stuff through the computer hahha
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