Howie Day Cover (Collide)

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Howie Day Cover (Collide)

Unread post by coldblueice41 » Tue Dec 28, 2004 6:43 pm

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Unread post by mangold » Tue Dec 28, 2004 9:02 pm

i comment in order of my thoughts...

eww static
good guitar
good voice
eh ok voice
i should listen to more howie day
he sings the chorus pretty good
i saw him play this on carson
HE MULITIPLIED! OH SHIT!
that was scary
NOT AGAIN!
it was less scary this time cause it was expected
oh only 2 posts
i should welcome him to Dmbtabs
oh its over
that was good

that was overall pretty good. id like to hear it without the static.

dmbtabs welcome to it!
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Unread post by Tranman66 » Tue Dec 28, 2004 9:08 pm

statics? sound like a hell of treble to me.

nice man, steady. good.

chorus can still use a little work
especially the last lines.
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Unread post by coldblueice41 » Tue Dec 28, 2004 9:16 pm

yeah, I'm working on the static. When I transfered from the recorder to the computer it came out with a bunch but I should have that fixed soon, and I took out the voice layers, so check back in a little bit

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Unread post by Tranman66 » Tue Dec 28, 2004 10:31 pm

a lil better, but still a hell of treb. nice guitar tho.
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Unread post by Appfro » Wed Dec 29, 2004 3:38 pm

this one's better than the bartender cover imo. good guitar playing. you definetly got that. you have good vocals, they just need a little work. you're holding back for one, and it's a bit nasaley (sp?)
it sounds like you lose beat just a little during the bridge, but not bad. nothing a tap of the foot can't fix.
a lot better. good job, just work on singing more from your diaphragm and less from your sinuses. good luck.

don't worry about recording quality, as long as you can hear it, it's good enough. no one here's expecting cd quality from computer mics.

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Unread post by mangold » Fri Dec 31, 2004 1:01 pm

what tab did you use?

edit: nvm, i didnt notice the whole "capo 4" in the tab that i found. that makes a difference!
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Unread post by martinstud17 » Fri Dec 31, 2004 1:16 pm

sounds good man
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