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Unread post by wench » Thu Dec 02, 2004 1:39 am

You know you fuckin love this song

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Unread post by dmbvideos » Thu Dec 02, 2004 1:48 am

Didn't work.

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Unread post by wench » Thu Dec 02, 2004 1:54 am

my bad, its works now

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Unread post by dmbvideos » Thu Dec 02, 2004 2:06 am

Sounds pretty good. It still sounds like you're whispering, but not as bad as before. Sing louder still, and you'll project.

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Unread post by yworry69 » Thu Dec 02, 2004 4:09 pm

you mixed up can't and won't in the first chorus but it was pretty good

edit - forgot to mention, especially good guitar
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Unread post by mangold » Thu Dec 02, 2004 6:22 pm

that was mad hotness. notable improvement in singing
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Unread post by mdel21 » Thu Dec 02, 2004 7:12 pm

really like the guitar

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Unread post by onid41 » Thu Dec 02, 2004 7:45 pm

mdel21 wrote:really like the guitar


ya sweet guitar playing
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Unread post by wench » Thu Dec 02, 2004 8:12 pm

you mixed up can't and won't in the first chorus
so...suicide? :cry:

jk, actually I mixed it up all three times, my bad :oops:

thanks all, I didnt have the song handy when I recorded this (accounts for the lyrical retardation I guess) and I couldnt remember like the bridge or any of the second guitar parts so I just made shit up

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Unread post by DMBartender » Sun Dec 05, 2004 7:22 pm

i really dig the guitar, but you gotta reach deeper for the vocals. you sound like you have a good voice, but you need to project more.
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