Billies Verse

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Billies Verse

Unread post by leen » Wed Jun 11, 2003 8:27 am

This is the billies verse for about 30 sec...just wondering if im playing to fast or rythm is off thanks.
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Unread post by jsgksu » Wed Jun 11, 2003 9:01 am

Sounds pretty good, needs improving a little but that will come with just practice, youve got the song pretty much down. For future reference you should use the mkw converter to convert your files from wav files to mp3, theyre much smaller and easier for people with dailup to download, but this is only 30 seconds so it didnt reall matter.
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Unread post by leen » Wed Jun 11, 2003 9:05 am

what part could be improved?

or is it just something that will come with practice?

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Unread post by jsgksu » Wed Jun 11, 2003 9:10 am

leen wrote:what part could be improved?

or is it just something that will come with practice?
I just mean it doesnt sound polished/perfected yet, but with practice it will. You can tell you know how to play it but just havent perfected the timing and hitting the notes perfect everytime, your almost there though, good job, great song.
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Unread post by leen » Wed Jun 11, 2003 9:18 am

ohh i see thanks

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Unread post by firedancer86 » Thu Jun 12, 2003 2:33 am

sounds good, you have the right thing going, but like he said, you just need to polish the speen and get a smooth chord/slide change going...keep it up :)
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Unread post by Roastbeef » Thu Jun 12, 2003 3:02 am

Definitely sounds like you're getting ahead of yourself. Slow this down:

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E:--------------
B:--------------
G:----4/5-------
D:-----------9--
A:-----------9--
E:-8~~~~~--5/7--
Try to find a good example (maybe L@LC) or someone's cover from here, and play along with it. You're hitting all the notes, but the rythym needs work. Hope this helps.

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