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juineaux · Unread post by **juineaux** » Mon Nov 08, 2004 12:28 am

I re-did this old song of mine(stolen memories). It hasnt been mixed yet, and Im thinking about adding some harmonies or some other instruments, tell me what you think-

http://s94451478.onlinehome.us/tomcadaret13.mp3

Appfro · Unread post by **Appfro** » Mon Nov 08, 2004 4:45 am

i love the guitar part.

you got a bob dylan type thing going w/ the voice. you have a great voice, i just think you need to enunciate a lot of people don't like when a lot of words get shoved into a verse, but i do.

i was very impressed. great job. i'd like to hear it w/ the harmonies etc.

You_Enjoy_Myself · Unread post by **You_Enjoy_Myself** » Mon Nov 08, 2004 10:34 am

Your voice sounds a lot like Kelly Joe Phelp's. I don't know if you've ever heard his stuff, but if you haven't you should check it out. And as for the cover, I liked it, it was a little plain, but it was good.

juineaux · Unread post by **juineaux** » Mon Nov 08, 2004 11:00 am

yea Im a big fan of KJP, i didnt know anyone else listened to him. The song was an original not a cover, but oh well-

You_Enjoy_Myself · Unread post by **You_Enjoy_Myself** » Mon Nov 08, 2004 11:16 am

Oh sorry, I didn't mean to say cover up there. I knew it was an original, I'm just a tard.

mangold · Unread post by **mangold** » Mon Nov 08, 2004 3:34 pm

its obviously well written and you have a great voice. extremely well done. that being said:

1) the guitar part sounds fragmented at times, mainly the intro
2) the words just turn to mush at the fast part.

MWR · Unread post by **MWR** » Mon Nov 08, 2004 6:56 pm

You have some really interesting things going on with the rhythm. I really like how in the beginning you sing sort of in free time and then the lyric matches up with the beat for just a moment. Really nice effect. I would try and use this a bit more actually.

I know I've said it before but your voice kicks all ass. I'm not gonna say you should enunciate more because we can just read the liner notes.

juineaux · Unread post by **juineaux** » Mon Nov 08, 2004 8:50 pm

thanks MWR, Some people like it when I cram the vocals into one line creating a weird little rythym thing, others hate it.

I've tried to enunciate more since I joined dmbtabs, but no luck. So like you said, people can read the liner notes.

MWR · Unread post by **MWR** » Mon Nov 08, 2004 9:04 pm

juineaux wrote:thanks MWR, Some people like it when I cram the vocals into one line creating a weird little rythym thing, others hate it.

I think you pulled it off nicely.
"The General" by Dispatch is a good example of how not to do it. That song has a great chorus though.

blaze · Unread post by **blaze** » Thu Nov 11, 2004 6:49 am

Keep it up and do you own thing, if you like it others will too.

I have always enjoyed the stuff you post on hear.
I can hear the kelly joe influence aswell.

Matty Boom · Unread post by **Matty Boom** » Thu Nov 11, 2004 3:06 pm

damn tom, always with the being awesome! would you stop it!

seriously though, i loved the guitar part...and we've had many a discussion about how much i dig your voice

i love hearing your stuff...so pop in and post more often!!

how's the outlook for a cd, btw?

juineaux · Unread post by **juineaux** » Thu Nov 11, 2004 3:34 pm

Matty Boom wrote:
how's the outlook for a cd, btw?

Well, I'm considering putting this song on, but i dunno....

But the album is going great(this time around), all the basic tracking has been done and we are starting to add other instruments to a few tracks. I'm having a release party on Jan. 15th, but the actual CD should be done before the 15th, i will post some mp3's of it when I get it done.

Matty Boom · Unread post by **Matty Boom** » Thu Nov 11, 2004 3:38 pm

juineaux wrote:
Matty Boom wrote:
how's the outlook for a cd, btw?
Well, I'm considering putting this song on, but i dunno....

But the album is going great(this time around), all the basic tracking has been done and we are starting to add other instruments to a few tracks. I'm having a release party on Jan. 15th, but the actual CD should be done before the 15th, i will post some mp3's of it when I get it done.

rock on!

january 15th is my birthday, btw...keep me posted on that! might wanna try and shoot down and show up for that!

Mulletman · Unread post by **Mulletman** » Thu Nov 11, 2004 10:59 pm

yeah i am really digging this song. your voice has alot of character and really makes the song (for me at least). i actually like the mushy thing people are talking about. i'm adding this to my playlist. keep me up to date on your new stuff.

6_strings_for_life · Unread post by **6_strings_for_life** » Sun Nov 14, 2004 10:51 pm

what do you use to record?

DMBTabs.com

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