Taiyed demo (311 cover)

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Taiyed demo (311 cover)

Unread post by Speenis » Tue Nov 09, 2004 2:00 am

Here is a demo of a song I am doing with a friend. He is going to add another guitar track later. Hopefully with a solo or something. Anyway, its nothing spectacular but I just thought I would throw this up here. Let me know what you think.

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Unread post by Speenis » Tue Nov 09, 2004 10:25 pm

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Unread post by myxomatosis » Wed Nov 10, 2004 1:05 pm

It didn't seem to flow as well as it should.. maybe its because it didn't have bass or drums. The bass is the best part of that song in my opinion. I guess if you take away the bass, drums, and guitar solo on that song, it sounds kind of dull.
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Unread post by allfalldown » Wed Nov 10, 2004 1:08 pm

How bout some Omaha Stylee? Good rendition, but I agree with the package...
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Unread post by Speenis » Thu Nov 11, 2004 3:02 pm

thepackage0 wrote:It didn't seem to flow as well as it should.. maybe its because it didn't have bass or drums. The bass is the best part of that song in my opinion. I guess if you take away the bass, drums, and guitar solo on that song, it sounds kind of dull.
Yes I agree. And there are actually two guitars playing throughout the whole song. Anyway, thanks for the reply. Hopefully my friend will put another guitar track over it.
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Unread post by Matty Boom » Thu Nov 11, 2004 3:48 pm

i like the effects you're using on the guitar there, for sure

guitar could flow a bit better in some places, but that's a cool little tune

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Unread post by Speenis » Thu Nov 11, 2004 6:35 pm

Thank you Matty. I rerecorded it a few days ago and a friend of mine will hopefully be adding to it. Vocals might be a bit rough cuz I don't know anyone who can rap like a mexican.
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