figured id write some lyrics here from scratch.

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figured id write some lyrics here from scratch.

Unread post by seanbryantkbq » Sat Oct 16, 2004 11:15 pm

just broke up with a girl, so i feel the need to write.... tell me waht you think


i saw you turn towards the door
and save the last bit of this
not to improve this state that im feelin
and wonder what cause of this love i have found

and lost...

like light on the shore, just before evening waves
swallow you whole
and make you feel this light was so decieving
that came from a star you know not as your home

well i found a way to break of the pain
and you take the pain and make it oh more
and one day youll come to pick up the meaning
of someone you lost oh so long before.

and lost...

like light on the shore, just before evening waves
swallow love whole
and make you feel that love was oh so decieving
that came from a heart that wont hear out your own


goodnight darling.... have fun with him.
don't kid yourself and don't fool yourself
this love's too good to last and i'm too old to dream

don't grow up too fast don't embrace the past
this life's too good to last and i'm too young to care

don't kid yourself and don't fool yourself
this life could be the last and we're too young to see

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