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Am I being paranoid?

Unread post by juineaux » Fri Sep 24, 2004 6:03 pm

Im almost done recording some songs for an album, and one thing is kinda bugging me. Everytime I record this one song of mine the vocals sound out of tune on the first line. I've played it for two other people and neither of them said I was out of tune, so am I just being really paranoid about this sorta thing?

Heres a short clip of the song(sounds out of tune at 0:25). Tell me what you think-
http://s94451478.onlinehome.us/sing1.mp3
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Unread post by i-am-me » Fri Sep 24, 2004 6:26 pm

Well at like 23...the first few words you say, it sounds a little off to me. but it gets better as you keep going. i don't know really what to say, cause you wrote the melody. but yea, i hear something that doesn't sound very right.
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Unread post by Trippin Hillbilly » Fri Sep 24, 2004 6:45 pm

The holly part sounds a little flat... but to be honest, I have no idea what the hell you just sang.
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Unread post by myxomatosis » Fri Sep 24, 2004 6:50 pm

Trippin Hillbilly wrote:to be honest, I have no idea what the hell you just sang.
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Unread post by i-am-me » Fri Sep 24, 2004 6:53 pm

thepackage0 wrote:
Trippin Hillbilly wrote:to be honest, I have no idea what the hell you just sang.
agreed.
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Unread post by Jer1400 » Fri Sep 24, 2004 11:34 pm

"Wake up in the mornin' and I'm hardly
Hardly waitin' for the moon to fall past my head again"

That's what I hear. And yeah, the first few words sound flat to me.
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Unread post by juineaux » Fri Sep 24, 2004 11:58 pm

Jer1400 wrote:"Wake up in the mornin' and I'm hardly
Hardly waitin' for the moon to fall past my head again"

That's what I hear. And yeah, the first few words sound flat to me.
those are the right lyrics, or at least close. I'm gonna re-do the recording of it, thanks-
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