Another Song Idea

dmbguitar718 · Unread post by **dmbguitar718** » Mon Aug 23, 2004 4:29 pm

It kinda evolved from my last idea I had, which I didn't really like. This one is a bit better I think.

I recorded this very quickly, just to get the idea down. It's a little rough in some spots (like always), but I wasn't really putting much effort into it.

Also, tell me what you think about the last/final part. I'm iffy about it.

http://www.patmcinnis.com/newsong2.mp3

mdel21 · Unread post by **mdel21** » Mon Aug 23, 2004 4:38 pm

I like

MWR · Unread post by **MWR** » Mon Aug 23, 2004 5:01 pm

It definitely sounds uninspired.

I know it's a rough recording but in comparison to One Day and your other stuff it was amateur.

I'm starting to feel like Simon Cowell. :thumbsdown:

btw Have you ever listened to Don Ross? Check out "Klimbin" from Passion Session. I think you would like him.

kcw · Unread post by **kcw** » Mon Aug 23, 2004 8:00 pm

you need a fill between the solo and the beginning part of the song it just seems to jump in there.

rampaged.congt · Unread post by **rampaged.congt** » Fri Sep 03, 2004 12:23 pm

The solo part reminds me a lot of "dodo"...but it's still good...I like it..keep it up

dmbguitar718 · Unread post by **dmbguitar718** » Fri Sep 03, 2004 12:24 pm

Oh yeah... I decided against this one.

i am sam2 · Unread post by **i am sam2** » Fri Sep 03, 2004 5:36 pm

dude can i have it?

dmbguitar718 · Unread post by **dmbguitar718** » Fri Sep 03, 2004 5:38 pm

sure. take it.

70% of the songs I write end up in the trash. This being one of them. However, I'm finally feeling confident about one right now.

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