Cry Freedom Cover

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Unread post by Orange Jeans » Mon Jul 12, 2004 2:38 am

awesome job !

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Unread post by GSR » Mon Jul 12, 2004 11:18 am

Orange Jeans wrote:awesome job !
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Unread post by DropD-MB » Tue Jul 13, 2004 8:21 pm

1:23 & 1:34 minutes/seconds into the song are some examples of where I think you need to work on your vocals on this song. Mainly the high parts need some work. Otherwise, I thought it was a good cover of a Dave song. Most people can't sing well on this board with the exception of 3 or 4 people on these boards. That may have changed though since I dont visit this wing of the forum as much as Iused too. I would add you to that list in a few months when you get those highs down. Practice man.

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Unread post by charliemike » Thu Jul 15, 2004 7:36 am

The effects just killed me.

I thought it was being played at 3/4 speed.

I like your other stuff but this is just not a good combination of stuff for this song.

Plus it's a bit slow tempo-wise.

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Unread post by captainp4 » Thu Jul 15, 2004 10:55 am

I think the effects worked well with song.

Great rhythm. Your voice is very listenable (is that a word?) unlike some other covers.

Guitar sounded pretty good too, but i don't know if i have my bass up too loud or something, but it was almost overwhelming everything else in the song. Other than that, great job!
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