just an on the spot #40

Ranting Thespian · Unread post by **Ranting Thespian** » Thu Jul 08, 2004 1:16 am

I got Cool Edit working better now, and my card. Now, Dusty put it up on his server. It's a mellow version. I improv'd the lyrics about a real situation, some may know about the situation.

What do you guys think?

http://www.2advmedia.com/40.mp3

BlueWaters · Unread post by **BlueWaters** » Thu Jul 08, 2004 2:09 am

That was pretty sweet. I think some lines might have been rushed through to fit, sometimes it works, but others theres not enough time. The vocals were impressive at times, I just thought you had good control of your voice on this one, but I don't know about the situation, you might have to explain that one/post the improv'd lyrics...I'd be up for hearing another version without a door closing in the background haha and with a little time put into it, maybe even a little longer cause you had me into it...peace

DMBFan63 · Unread post by **DMBFan63** » Thu Jul 08, 2004 2:14 am

Good job again ranting.. Yeah, the door closing part of it was annoying, but eh, what're you gonna do if you have yahoo open and someone signs off?

Vocals were on key from what i heard..Guitar work is solid, not much to say about it.. good job is all

Ranting Thespian · Unread post by **Ranting Thespian** » Thu Jul 08, 2004 11:37 pm

BlueWaters wrote:That was pretty sweet. I think some lines might have been rushed through to fit, sometimes it works, but others theres not enough time. The vocals were impressive at times, I just thought you had good control of your voice on this one, but I don't know about the situation, you might have to explain that one/post the improv'd lyrics...I'd be up for hearing another version without a door closing in the background haha and with a little time put into it, maybe even a little longer cause you had me into it...peace

Yeah, some were rushed, some weren't, it was an on the spot thing (like the title). I was on yahoo at the time, and forgot to turn down my speakers. But, thanks. Also, I was just saying some know the situation on here, to clue those people in on what I was singing about. For the situation, it's long and painful to tell, so I won't tell it.

Thanks guys.

GreedylilPig · Unread post by **GreedylilPig** » Fri Jul 09, 2004 12:12 am

Ranting,
Enjoyable listen. I could really tell it was coming from your heart and it doesn't seem like you're trying to make your voice anything more than it is. I tried making out as many words as I could and managed to gather most of them, but if you have some time I'd like to see the words you used typed out.

ericwormann · Unread post by **ericwormann** » Fri Jul 09, 2004 12:17 am

you seriously need to start using a pick, but it was good overall.

skpr41 · Unread post by **skpr41** » Fri Jul 09, 2004 9:31 am

great job ranting!!!

Ranting Thespian · Unread post by **Ranting Thespian** » Sat Jul 10, 2004 1:29 am

winglet82 wrote:you seriously need to start using a pick, but it was good overall.

why?

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